Corrections

עזור לתקן שגיאות עכשיו!תוקן

טקסט של - English

    • I was right!

  • My friend used to laugh at me.
    • It didn't happen because I was ugly or so immensely funny.
  • I just had a very big backpack.
    • I've chosen it myself.
    • She often wondered what I put in there, apart from the books.
    • I began to show her what was in my amazing backpack.
    • I pulled out a cup, a sandwich, a thermos full of nice hot tea, an adhesive plaster, iodine, an umbrella, a Barbie, three chalks, a flashlight, two correctors and a lot more things.
    • I understood that I shouldn't have done it but it was too late.
    • Every day she grinned and asked me for how long exactly this very sandwich was in my rucksack (though it was always fresh and she knew it pretty well).
  • One day my teacher told me that we were going on an excursion.
    • It was cold that day.
    • She told us to leave our backpacks but I refused.
  • She shrugged her shoulders and agreed.
  • I always take my things with me (school things), even if I know that nothing's going to happen to them.
  • That's my oddity, I think.
    • That excursion was more like a quest.
    • We had to be in the street all the time, and all of us were cold.
    • My friend shivered and wanted to eat, and when the quest just began, she fell down and scrached her hand.
    • That's when I with a generous gesture pulled out an anorak, a jumper, two cups, my favourite thermos and three sausages, everything for the scratch and even a big chokolate bar!
    • She just opened her mouth.
    • After the quest she told me she was sorry for teasing me a bit, but I wasn't in the least angry, and of course she never laughed at my rucksack again.

בבקשה, עזור לתקן כל משפט! - English