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  • Brighton old town improvement proposal

    • Dear John Campbell, My name is Lydia Hayward and I am writing with regard to the announcement made by the Council to know the citizens opinion.
    • I live in Brighton since 2012 and I am the owner of a little restaurant near the bay area.
    • I would like to emphasise that Brighton has become a great touristic place in the last years, and this is the main reason why public authorities should meticulous study the impact that both propositions could provoke.
    • From my point of view and regarding the economic developement of the area, I would recommend the restriction access.
    • At first, it seems a drastic measure, however, following the example from other European cities, I would say that this measure would increase the number of visitors and tourists.
    • Moreover, this city could became an example of a pedestrian life.
    • All this type of restrictions are tough at first, but when people use to them, they will be gratefull and proud of having a clean and safe city.
    • It will be so comfortable walking through the streets without cars, speciallly for children, because they could run and play in a safety place.
    • In the other hand, I consider the proposal two an elitist measure that only will be profitable for people with purchasing power.
    • As consequence, this city will become in a city for privileged citizens and it will establish the distinction between first class citizens and second class.
    • As a businesswoman I am absolutely sure that sales will increase with the first proposal and also the quality of life.
    • It is indisputable that without vehicules levels of pollution will decrease considerably, we will enjoy a cleaner air and the city will be more human.

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  • Sententia 1
    • Dear John Campbell, My name is Lydia Hayward and I am writing with regard to the announcement made by the Council to know the citizens opinion.
      Elige nunc !
    • Dear John Campbell,¶
      My name is Lydia Hayward and I am writing with regard to the announcement made by the Council to
      knowask the citizens' opinions.
    • Dear John Campbell,¶

      My name is Lydia Hayward and I am writing with regard to the announcement made by the Council seeking to know the citizens' opinions.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1
  • Sententia 2
  • Sententia 3
    • I would like to emphasise that Brighton has become a great touristic place in the last years, and this is the main reason why public authorities should meticulous study the impact that both propositions could provoke.
      Elige nunc !
    • I would like to emphasise that Brighton has become a great touristic place attraction in the last few years, and this is the main reason why the public authorities should meticulous study the impact that both propositions could provoke.
    • I would like to emphasisze that Brighton has become a great touristic place attraction in the lasrecent years, and this is the main reason why the public authorities should meticulously study the impact that both propositions could provoke.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
  • Sententia 4
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    • At first, it seems a drastic measure, however, following the example from other European cities, I would say that this measure would increase the number of visitors and tourists.
      Elige nunc !
    • At first, it seems like a drastic measure, however, following the example ofrom other European cities, I would say that this measure would increase the number of visitors and tourists.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5
  • Sententia 6
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    • All this type of restrictions are tough at first, but when people use to them, they will be gratefull and proud of having a clean and safe city.
      Elige nunc !
    • All thisese types of restrictions are tough at first, but when people use to them, they will be gratefull and proud tof havinge a clean and safe city.
    • All thisese types of restrictions are tough at first, but when people get used to them, they will be gratefull and proud tof havinge a clean and safe city.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 7ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 7
  • Sententia 8
    • It will be so comfortable walking through the streets without cars, speciallly for children, because they could run and play in a safety place.
      Elige nunc !
    • It will be so comfortable walking through the streets without cars, especiallly for children, because they could run and play in a safety place.
    • It will be so comfortable walking through the streets without cars, especiallly for children, because they couldan run and play in a safety place.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8
  • Sententia 9
    • In the other hand, I consider the proposal two an elitist measure that only will be profitable for people with purchasing power.
      Elige nunc !
    • IOn the other hand, I consider the proposal two an elitist measure, that only willwill only be profitable for people with purchasing power.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9
  • Sententia 10
    • As consequence, this city will become in a city for privileged citizens and it will establish the distinction between first class citizens and second class.
      Elige nunc !
    • As consequence, this city will become in a city for privileged citizens and it will establish the distinction between first class citizens and second class.
    • As a consequence, this city will become in a city for privileged citizens and it will establish thea distinction between first class citizens and second class.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 10ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 10
  • Sententia 11
    • As a businesswoman I am absolutely sure that sales will increase with the first proposal and also the quality of life.
      Elige nunc !
    • As a businesswoman, I am absolutely sure that sales and the quality of life will increase with the first proposal and also the quality of life.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11
  • Sententia 12
    • It is indisputable that without vehicules levels of pollution will decrease considerably, we will enjoy a cleaner air and the city will be more human.
      Elige nunc !
    • It is indisputable that without vehicules the levels of pollution will decrease considerably, w. We will enjoy a cleaner air and the city will be more human.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12