Düzeltmeler

Marrrryam'den mesaj - English

    • I try to write a comparison essay, is it correct?

    • Television and newspapers are two forms of communication and there are some common similarities between them.
    • Television had been discovered for the first time in Europe, like newspapers had.
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing us about daily news.
    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise awareness of the people in many fields.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

  • Başlık
  • cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing us about daily news.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment, and they are informing us about the daily news.
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing and update us about the daily news.
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment, and they are informing us daily about dailythe news.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment, have been published in newspapers.
    • Articles on a wide variety of articletopics hasve been published in newspapers, s. Such astopics include politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, touching many different topics such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
    • A wide variety of articles hasve been published in newspapers, on many topics such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a wide range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • On television, the same asas in newspapers, there hasve been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • On television, the same aslike in newspapers, there has been a lot ofare many channels that can cover a range of programmes likes including sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • On television, -the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels with different programs, that can cover a range of programmedifferent topics like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • On television, the same asjust as in newspapers, there hasve been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • Either of themBoth television and newspapers can be used to deliver advertising messages and itsthat revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messageements and itsad revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages, and itsthat revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7