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    • I try to write a comparison essay, is it correct?

    • Television and newspapers are two forms of communication and there are some common similarities between them.
    • Television had been discovered for the first time in Europe, like newspapers had.
    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing us about daily news.
    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise awareness of the people in many fields.

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    • Television and newspapers are two forms of communication and there are some common similarities between them.
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    • Television and newspapers are two forms of communication, and there are some common similarities between them.
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    • Television and newspapers are two formdifferent ways of communication andbut there are still some common similarities between them.
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    • Television and newspapers are two forms of communication, and there are some common similarities between them.
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    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing us about daily news.
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    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment, and they are informing us about the daily news.
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    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment and they are informing and update us about the daily news.
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    • They were both invented to provide people with information and entertainment, and they are informing us daily about dailythe news.
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    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
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    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment, have been published in newspapers.
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    • Articles on a wide variety of articletopics hasve been published in newspapers, s. Such astopics include politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
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    • A wide variety of articles has been published in newspapers, touching many different topics such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
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    • A wide variety of articles hasve been published in newspapers, on many topics such as politics, business, sports, art, news and entertainment.
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    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • On television, the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels that can cover a wide range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • On television, the same asas in newspapers, there hasve been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • On television, the same aslike in newspapers, there has been a lot ofare many channels that can cover a range of programmes likes including sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • On television, -the same as newspapers, there has been a lot of channels with different programs, that can cover a range of programmedifferent topics like sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • On television, the same asjust as in newspapers, there hasve been a lot of channels that can cover a range of programmes like sports, entertainment, news and films.
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    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • Either of themBoth television and newspapers can be used to deliver advertising messages and itsthat revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages and its revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • Either of them can be used to deliver advertising messageements and itsad revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • EitherBoth of them can be used to deliver advertising messages, and itsthat revenue provides a significant portion of the funding for most television networks and newspaper companies.
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    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise awareness of the people in many fields.
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    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise awareness of the people in many fields.
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    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise people's awareness of the people in many fields.
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    • In conclusion, both television and newspapers can be used to raise people's awareness of the people in manyin many different fields.
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