Korektoj

Text from nederduits93 - English

    • University Motivation

    • I applied for European Studies, because Europe is my home continent, and I originate from two european countries myself, hence I am very interested in Europe's history and future.
    • The european unification process with its advantages and disadvantages fascinates me, as well as the european history, with some countries in whom I am more interested than others, for example France, England, Germany, Greece and the Netherlands.
    • My main interests in the programme are thus the history of Europe and the European Union, and the politics of and regarding the European Union.
    • Moreover, I wanted to study in the Netherlands, because I am half-dutch while I grew up in Germany.
    • Also, there are no similar studies in Germany available, and the Open Day made a good impression on me.
    • First I wanted to study International Relations, but as a combination of politics with history, cultural studies and a little bit of philosophy, European Studies seems more interdisciplinary and thus more interesting to me, while it still offers (more or less) the same opportunities as a International Relations Programme.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • I applied for European Studies, because Europe is my home continent, and I originate from two european countries myself, hence I am very interested in Europe's history and future.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I applied for European Studies, because Europe is my home continent, and I originatboth my parents come from two eEuropean countries myself,too; hence I am very interested in Europe's history and future.
    • I applied for European Studies, because Europe is my home continent, and I originate from two eEuropean countries myself, henceand I am very interested in Europe's history and future.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • The european unification process with its advantages and disadvantages fascinates me, as well as the european history, with some countries in whom I am more interested than others, for example France, England, Germany, Greece and the Netherlands.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The eEuropean unification process, with its advantages and disadvantages, fascinates me, as well as the eEuropean history, withand there are some countries in whomich I am moreespecially interested than others, for example: France, EnglandThe UK, Germany, Greece and tThe Netherlands.
    • The eEuropean unification process with its advantages and disadvantages fascinates me, as well as the eEuropean history, with some countries in whomich I am more interested in than others, for example France, England, Germany, Greece and the Netherlands.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • My main interests in the programme are thus the history of Europe and the European Union, and the politics of and regarding the European Union.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My main interests in the programme are thus the hHistory of Europe and the European Union, and the politics of and regarding the European Union.
    • My main interests in the programme are thus the history of Europe and the European Union, and the politics of and regarding the European Union politics.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • First I wanted to study International Relations, but as a combination of politics with history, cultural studies and a little bit of philosophy, European Studies seems more interdisciplinary and thus more interesting to me, while it still offers (more or less) the same opportunities as a International Relations Programme.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • FAt first I wanted to study International Relations, but as a combination ofhips, combined with politics withand history, cultural studies and a little bit of pPhilosophy,. European Studies seems morquite interdisciplinary and thuserefore more interesting to me, while it still offers (more or less)about the same working opportunities as athe International Relationships Programme.
    • First I wanted to study International Relations, but aEuropean Studies is more interdisciplinary; as it is a combination of politics with history, with cultural studies and a little bit of philosophy, European Studies seems more interdisciplinary and thus more interesting to me, while it still offers (more or less) the same opportunities as a International Relations Programme.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6