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Text from johnask - English

  • Miths and Heroes

  • Introduction: To start with, in a general way, a myth is a fictitious character who is often represented as a hero in the eyes of the people.
  • Indeed, a hero is a human who is different from the average human beings.
  • The capacities of the hero are superior to the average but how to define the average?
  • We are going to wonder what is the hero in a general way and more specifically, why Sherlock Holmes can be considered a hero?
  • Keeping in mind the general idea that I have about a hero, I am going to try to explain why Sherlock Holmes is a hero for me I/ A hero generally: First,what is a hero?
  • According to my opinion a hero is the person who has the intellectual or physical abilities to serve the society.
  • Indeed, a hero has necessarily no great power and is not necessarily fictitious.
  • We Face heroes of all types everyday: the mail man who delivers us the mail in the morning, the baker who gives us the bread, the doctor who treats us, the police which protects us, or still the most important according to me because they allow us to learn: the teachers.
  • Naturally, it can appear strange coach according to the ideas that are made people, the heroes are necessarily Men or women who developed the muscle and having great power as Fly, to throw the fire, forsee the future etc. … But the definition of a hero for me is wider and much more open.
  • For me, the society possesses millions of heroes who help us in our everyday life.
  • As I said it previously, the workers are heroes for me, I know that every working person lasts to earns his or hers salary, helps the society and this makes a hero out of that person.
  • Here is the personal definition of a hero which can seem strange but which is according to me the rather truthful.
  • Well on, the characters fictitious as spiderman, superman, to wonder woman, batman, are heroes but they are also fictitious and for me, the strongest heroes, are present in the real life.
  • II/ Is Sherlock Holmes a hero ?
  • Besides, during year, we had been studying a fictitious character particularly amazing according to me.
  • Indeed, Sherlock Holmes is a full character of the society.
  • It’s certain that a character as this one cannot exist in the real life but we can classify it all the same as the category of the fictitious heroes.
  • It’s someone who has an impressive intellectual capacity and a capacity of analysis superior to the average and it’s for me, qualities of a hero that Sherlock possesses.
  • Indeed, it’s someone who helps the investigators, and he saves plenty of lives by using his capacity to be deducted from things at people and it is not ordinary capacities.
  • Furthermore, it’s someone very mysterious and he can make, in a short time, full list of information on a person whom he has just met.
  • That's why I would classify him in the category of the fictitious heroes.
  • Nevertheless, we could however think it is not a hero because it is all the same somebody who likes crimes and who adores stopping serial killer.
  • Sherlock has no limit and we can see him in particular in the first episode of the series with the serial killer who killed people by giving them a poison.
  • He agreed to meet the challenges and to take the pill with the killer.
  • That's why to consider it one heroin can be disputed but according to me, we can say all the same that it’s a hero because he makes the happiness around him for a major of his time.
  • Conclusion: To conclude, I mean that the vision of a hero at people can vary but she can also vary at the same person according to the age which she has.
  • Indeed, when we are small, a hero are the ones that we see on the television as spiderman or superman but when we grow up, this vision of things changes.
  • Indeed, the definition becomes wider and vaster.
  • Heroin is more the one only has great power but the one who helps the others and who serves the population thanks to its work.
  • For me, a hero it’s the person who helps people, who saves them, who teaches them and who advise them without having super-powers.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • Introduction: To start with, in a general way, a myth is a fictitious character who is often represented as a hero in the eyes of the people.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • We are going to wonder what is the hero in a general way and more specifically, why Sherlock Holmes can be considered a hero?
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Keeping in mind the general idea that I have about a hero, I am going to try to explain why Sherlock Holmes is a hero for me I/ A hero generally: First,what is a hero?
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • We Face heroes of all types everyday: the mail man who delivers us the mail in the morning, the baker who gives us the bread, the doctor who treats us, the police which protects us, or still the most important according to me because they allow us to learn: the teachers.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Naturally, it can appear strange coach according to the ideas that are made people, the heroes are necessarily Men or women who developed the muscle and having great power as Fly, to throw the fire, forsee the future etc. … But the definition of a hero for me is wider and much more open.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • As I said it previously, the workers are heroes for me, I know that every working person lasts to earns his or hers salary, helps the society and this makes a hero out of that person.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
  • Zdanie 13
    • Well on, the characters fictitious as spiderman, superman, to wonder woman, batman, are heroes but they are also fictitious and for me, the strongest heroes, are present in the real life.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13
  • Zdanie 14
  • Zdanie 15
  • Zdanie 16
  • Zdanie 17
    • It’s certain that a character as this one cannot exist in the real life but we can classify it all the same as the category of the fictitious heroes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17
  • Zdanie 18
    • It’s someone who has an impressive intellectual capacity and a capacity of analysis superior to the average and it’s for me, qualities of a hero that Sherlock possesses.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18
  • Zdanie 19
    • Indeed, it’s someone who helps the investigators, and he saves plenty of lives by using his capacity to be deducted from things at people and it is not ordinary capacities.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 19DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 19
  • Zdanie 20
    • Furthermore, it’s someone very mysterious and he can make, in a short time, full list of information on a person whom he has just met.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20
  • Zdanie 21
  • Zdanie 22
    • Nevertheless, we could however think it is not a hero because it is all the same somebody who likes crimes and who adores stopping serial killer.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 22DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 22
  • Zdanie 23
    • Sherlock has no limit and we can see him in particular in the first episode of the series with the serial killer who killed people by giving them a poison.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 23DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 23
  • Zdanie 24
  • Zdanie 25
    • That's why to consider it one heroin can be disputed but according to me, we can say all the same that it’s a hero because he makes the happiness around him for a major of his time.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 25DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 25
  • Zdanie 26
    • Conclusion: To conclude, I mean that the vision of a hero at people can vary but she can also vary at the same person according to the age which she has.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 26DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 26
  • Zdanie 27
    • Indeed, when we are small, a hero are the ones that we see on the television as spiderman or superman but when we grow up, this vision of things changes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 27DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 27
  • Zdanie 28
  • Zdanie 29
    • Heroin is more the one only has great power but the one who helps the others and who serves the population thanks to its work.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 29DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 29
  • Zdanie 30
    • For me, a hero it’s the person who helps people, who saves them, who teaches them and who advise them without having super-powers.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 30DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 30