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Essay.

• Sportsmen are often injured while competiting, and the fact had become the cause of some people voting for banning violent sports.

• There are some advantages to banning violent sports.

• To begin with, if we banned these sports, competitors would not be injured so often.

• Sports are meant to be healthy, and violent sports are not such.

• Moreover, there are women, children and senior people amongst those who watch these sports.

• Consequently, violence will cause psyhic damage to them.

• Firstly, only prepared and professional people take part in the competitions, and they have seen to safety.

• That means they made their choises, and we can let them do what they want.

• Secondly, lots of people do sports for a living.

• If we banned violent sports, these people would have to look for other job opportunities, and they will protest.

• To sum up, there are arguments both for and against banning violent sports.

• I think everyone has the right to make their own choice, so the sports should not be banned.