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  • Traffic jams

    • It is known that over the past few decades, the quantity of cars in cities has increased dramatically, which, unfortunately, lead to a traffic jams and a number of problems related to this concern such as air pollution, wastage of time and others.
  • Some people argue that the best way to solve this problem is the reconstruction of old roads to make them wider.
    • Other claims that there are other more advantageous methods.
    • Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
    • Not surprisingly, some people believe that the best way to overcome traffic jams is the expanding of old roads to the required sizes.
  • In defense of this opinion, it can be said that this method is really capable of solving traffic problems in large cities.
    • According to statistics that has been provided by the World Association of the Road Constructors, nowadays, the width of 32% of roads does not correspond to the amount of traffic, after the reconstruction of which, only 11% of them will again form traffic jams.
    • And this is an excellent example, demonstrating the importance of expanding roads in the fight against traffic jams in cities.
    • Considering the problem of traffic jams from a different angle, it is worth noting that reconstruction is not always could be an optimal solution.
  • In contrast to positive qualities, it is necessary to highlight the negative, namely high cost, long duration of work coupled with additional temporary inconveniences for road users, as well as in some cases the impossibility of its implementation due to a number of restrictions.
  • For example, other existing modern ways of struggling with traffic jams, such as optimizing the traffic lights, using navigators warning of the overloaded sections of the road, give a positive result at minimal cost.
  • In conclusion, taking everything into account, I am convinced that expanding roads is good but not the best way to eliminate traffic jams.
    • This is because neither is it believed that this method is optimal solution that gives fast results, nor is this could be always implemented.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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  • Zdanie 1
    • It is known that over the past few decades, the quantity of cars in cities has increased dramatically, which, unfortunately, lead to a traffic jams and a number of problems related to this concern such as air pollution, wastage of time and others.
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    • It is known that over the past few decades, the quantity of cars in cities has increased dramatically, which, unfortunately, leads to a traffic jams and a number of problems related to this concern such as air pollution, wastage of time and others.
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    • It is known that oOver the past few decades, the quantitynumber of cars in cities has increased dramatically, which, unfortunately, leading to a traffic jams and a number of problems related to this concernother related problems, such as air pollution, and wastage of time and othersed time.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • BI will analyze both sides of the argument will be analyzed before, draw a logical conclusion is drawn and, and give my own perspective is given.
      robynbrobynb profile picture Komentarze 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Not surprisingly, some people believe that the best way to overcome traffic jams is the expanding of old roads to the required sizes.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Not surprisingly, some people believe that the best way to overcome traffic jams is theo expanding of old roads to the required sizes.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • In defense of this opinion, it can be said that this method is really capable of solving traffic problems in large cities.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • According to statistics that has been provided by the World Association of the Road Constructors, nowadays, the width of 32% of roads does not correspond to the amount of traffic, after the reconstruction of which, only 11% of them will again form traffic jams.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • According to the statistics that has been provided by the World Association of the Road Constructors, nowadays, the width of 32% of roads does not correspond to the amount of traffic, after the reconstruction of which, only 11% of them will again form traffic jams.
      ArtemisRoseArtemisRose profile picture Komentarze
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • And this is an excellent example, demonstrating the importance of expanding roads in the fight against traffic jams in cities.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • And this is an excellent example, demonstrating the importance of expanding roads in theto fight against traffic jams in cities.
      ari1987ari1987 profile picture Komentarze
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • Considering the problem of traffic jams from a different angle, it is worth noting that reconstruction is not always could be an optimal solution.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Considering the problem of traffic jams from a different angle, it is worth noting that reconstruction is cannot always could be an optimal solution.
      ArtemisRoseArtemisRose profile picture Komentarze 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • In contrast to positive qualities, it is necessary to highlight the negative, namely high cost, long duration of work coupled with additional temporary inconveniences for road users, as well as in some cases the impossibility of its implementation due to a number of restrictions.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • For example, other existing modern ways of struggling with traffic jams, such as optimizing the traffic lights, using navigators warning of the overloaded sections of the road, give a positive result at minimal cost.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • In conclusion, taking everything into account, I am convinced that expanding roads is good but not the best way to eliminate traffic jams.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12
  • Zdanie 13
    • This is because neither is it believed that this method is optimal solution that gives fast results, nor is this could be always implemented.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • This is because neither is it believed that this method isthe most optimal solution that gives fast results, nor iscan this could be always implemented. ¶
      ArtemisRoseArtemisRose profile picture Komentarze
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 13