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    • Dear student, After reading your sorrowful letter I am writing you back to uphold you handling these cruel verbal and psychological attacks being suffered due to your good marks.
    • I understand how harmful words can be at your teenage plus I am very sorry to read that they do not only intimidate you inside the school but also on the way home and through the social media.
  • First of all, it is really important to tell your parents and close friends about this ordeal as the more you speak about your worries the more relieved you will feel.
    • I strongly recommend you not to neglect your schoolwork as your future depends on your grades.
    • Even if you think that lower marks would solve the problem, remember that bullies always find an excuse to tease and taunt, causing other’s unhappiness.
    • It would be a good idea not to hide from your attackers what at the beginning will overwhelm and paralyze you, but gradually you will run-over fear, anxiety and handle the situation.
    • Summing up, I’m sure that if you follow my advice you will overcome the situation.
  • Good luck Eva Martin

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English