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  • Can you help me, please? emotions(1)

  • Can you help me, please? emotions(1) Emotions.
    • There are a lot of kinds of feelings, all of them are important and necessary, and everybody have to learn how to go through these.
    • There are a lot of small things which make me very happy, for example, if I'm stressed I usually take my dog for a long walk.
    • After that I feel much better and relaxed.
    • In my case, meeting with my family to celebrate something is important and it makes us to be very close.
    • I found out fishing several years ago and now it is my hobby more satisfying.
    • I'm always looking forward having free time to go fishing because I think it is very relaxing and It helps me out not to be bored.
    • There are a lot of things that makes me angry, for example I can't see anybody who doesn't take care of the animals.
    • People who drive in dangerous way make me really angry too.
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    • There are a lot of kinds of feelings, all of them are important and necessary, and everybody have to learn how to go through these.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are a lot of kinds of feelings, all of them are important and necessary, and everybody have to learn how to gomany kinds of emotions that we experience in life, and all of them are important and necessary. In one way or the other everybody is going to face some kind of emotion and will have to learn how to deal with it and progress through ithese.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • There are a lot of small things which make me very happy, for example, if I'm stressed I usually take my dog for a long walk.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are a lot of small things whichimple pleasures in my life that make me very happy, f. For example, i: If I'm stressed I usually take my dog for a long walk, and after that I feel much better and much more relaxed.
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    • In my case, meeting with my family to celebrate something is important and it makes us to be very close.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In my case, meeting with my family to celebrate something is important and it makes us to be very closedraws us closer together.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I'm always looking forward having free time to go fishing because I think it is very relaxing and It helps me out not to be bored.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'm always looking forward to having free time to go fishing because I think it is very relaxing and Iit helps me out not to beis a great activity to do when I am bored.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • There are a lot of things that makes me angry, for example I can't see anybody who doesn't take care of the animals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are a lot of things that makes me angry, f. For example, I can't see anybody who doesn't take care of thedo not get along at all with people who mistreat animals.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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