Pataisymai

Text from Jeffna - English

  • Space and exchange : URGENT MERCI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • We will define space and Exchange: Space: The dimension of height, depth and width within which all things exist and move.
  • Exchange: An act of giving one thing and receiving another one whatever this ‘thing ‘may be.
  • My theme is travel so we can ask ourselves why we travel.
  • For illustrate this question I selected three documents: What language to speak, New Zealand travel brochure,and Skelling .
  • We will first analyze that we can have different motivations to learn a new language and then we can travel around the world to discover new places.
  • People may have different goals to learn a new language.
  • Someone who likes music, for example, will listen to music in the language they want to learn. or else, watch a movie in original.
  • For example, David's first language is Spanish.
  • He comes from Argentina.
  • His second language is English because he studied in the United States at the age of five.
  • He would like to learn French because he likes it, he studied at school and it is similar to Spanish.
  • To learn this language, he uses the website, and Duolinguo, a mobile application to improve his French.
  • David thinks that when you speak 7 out of 10 languages, you can speak with 95% of the people on the planet.
  • And the most logical languages to learn are those that more people speak.
  • You allow yourself to communicate with a higher percentage of the population.
  • Afterwards you have to go to the country of the language you are studying but you can also decide to travel for other things, for example to discover a new culture like food, lifestyle or monuments, landscapes or to have a break.
  • But for that you must bring important items with you like your mobile phone to call your friend your family and in case of emergency.
  • Or money to buy gifts, a map to find your way and not get lost.
  • Moreover, most importantly, a bag to carry items.
  • Then we can travel around the world to discover new places.
  • Indeed, we can to go screen Tourism.
  • Screen tourism it’s: when you travel to visit famous movie set places where films were shot.
  • For exemple Skelling Mikael an island where Star wars or in New Zealand Hobbies were filmed.
  • Skelling Mickael it’s in the Northern Ireland, 11 miles off the Irish coast, near the town “Portmagee”.
  • The landscape is mind blowing.
  • It will bring 4.7 billion to the Irish economy because people will visit it and spend money for example in hotels, restaurants.
  • And Other than the scenery of Star wars, you can visit the hobbie movie set in Experience the Trilogy in the North Island of New Zealand.
  • This place offers several exploration :Te Puia,The legendary Black water rafting co and Hobbiton movie set and activities in different places like Rotorua we can Mori welcome ceremony and cultural performance ,to eat ,to do sport at Te Puia and Steambox .We can in Matamata take a walk of Hobbiton Movie Set.
  • And we can in Waitomo to do Black Labyrinth.
  • In conclusion, we can to learn different something in travelling.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English