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    • Abstract This research is conducted to explore the factors that influence the intention of foreign tourists to revisit Russia for FIFA 2018.
    • This research aims to better understand how destination image affects visitors of the 2018 FIFA World Cup and which composing factors of the destination image influenced tourists' intention to visit Russia the most.
    • The additional goal is to determine the influence of the political factor on tourists' intention to visit Russia.
    • It also aims on identifying the main and unimportant factors of the destination image overall.
    • The present researcher examined four factors which impacted on the intention of foreign tourists to visit Russia after FIFA 2018, and those factors were included demographic profile, costs, visitor services, political situation, and affective image.
    • This research was descriptive research study, and quantitative data collected method was applied to obtain firsthand information from participants.
  • Primary data refers to data that is directly collected by researchers during the study.
    • The target population for this current study constituted all adults who are living outside Russia, who have visited Moscow at least once as international tourists in order to attend a mass sport event, and whose age started from 16 years old and up.
    • Questionnaire link was distributed by posting on thematic forums in the Internet and in thematic groups in social network Facebook, and by sending direct e-mails and private messages in Facebook to reach 300 target respondents. 1.
    • Introduction Today, international tourism is one of the most dynamically developing industries of the world economy.
    • Over recent years in Russia, active scientific studies have been under way focused on rethinking the phenomenon of tourism in modern society, on studying it as the aggregate activity performed across multiple sectors of economy, on justifying systematic approach to its planning.
    • The Russian Federation possesses great potential for tourism development.
  • Considerable share of solid land with very diverse landscapes is located in this country.
    • There are unique natural objects (the lake Baikal, Valley of Geysers in Kamchatka Peninsula, Siberian boreal forest, etc.) and numerous historical and architectural landmarks in its territory, that includes parts of Europe and Asia.
  • There is a well-developed international transportation network, though hotel sector and internal transport need be reconstructed and upgraded.
    • It should be noted that there are opportunities in Russia for both summer and winter tourism.
  • Specialists note that, despite the growth of inbound tourism, Russia’s tourist income is significantly lower than in other countries, showing similar growth of inbound tourism.
    • Implementation of tourism development programs in Russia is not as successful as it was initially planned.
  • (Silayeva A.A., 2016) According to World Tourism Organization (UNWTO), the share of tourism in the global GDP, taking into account the multiplicative effect, makes 9.4%.
    • According to the data of the Ministry of Sport, Tourism and Youth Policy of the Russian Federation, the share of revenues from tourism in GDP in different countries amounts to figures as following: Greece - 15.5%, Spain - 15.3%, Austria - 12.5%, whereas in Russia this figure makes just 6.5% But According to statistics "Number of entry tourist trips to Russia 2014-2016 Statistics taken from the official site of Rustourizm" , the number of tourists arriving each year is declining .
    • According to well-established stereotypes, abroad Russia is a huge country with bears, vodka and endless winter.
    • Writers of Hollywood blockbusters still use uncomplicated images from the era of the USSR.
  • Russians are portrayed by gloomy gangsters or impenetrable agents of the KGB / FSB, who avoid feelings and are prone to drinking alcohol.
  • The beginning of 2014 was marked by events that irreversibly changed the state of affairs in the Russian economy.
  • The first and main stage was the events in Ukraine, which followed immediately after the end of the so brightly held Olympic Games in Sochi.
  • By themselves, these games were the strongest impetus to the development of both domestic tourism proper and the popularization of Russia and Russian resorts among foreigners.
  • However, Ukrainian events, including the annexation of Crimea to Russia and economic sanctions against Russia, on the one hand, added another extremely popular now internal direction - the Crimean peninsula, on the other hand, sharply reduced the demand for travel.
  • The Russian tourism industry has an inefficient advertising system.
  • Thus, the most effective way is to serve as a mega-sport event.
  • Mega-sport events are prestigious competitions in which the best teams of the world take part.
  • Currently, the Olympic Games, both summer and winter, as well as world championships in football and hockey are the largest sporting events, so they occupy an important place in international tourism.

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    • Abstract This research is conducted to explore the factors that influence the intention of foreign tourists to revisit Russia for FIFA 2018.
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      is conducted to explores the factors that influence the intention of foreign tourists to revisit Russia for FIFA 2018.
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      This research is conducted to explore the factors that influence the intention of foreign tourists to revisit Russia for FIFA 2018.
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    • This research aims to better understand how destination image affects visitors of the 2018 FIFA World Cup and which composing factors of the destination image influenced tourists' intention to visit Russia the most.
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    • This research aims to better understand how the image of a destination image affects visitors of the 2018 FIFA World Cup, and which composing factors of the destination imagefactors influenced tourists' intention to visit Russia the most.
    • This research aims to better understand how destination image affects visitors of the 2018 FIFA World Cup and which composing factors of the destination image influenced tourists' intention to visit Russia the most.good
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    • The additional goal is to determine the influence of the political factor on tourists' intention to visit Russia.
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    • The additional goal is to determine the influence of the political factorFurthermore, this research will determine the influence of politics/ the wider political environment on tourists' intentions to visit Russia.
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    • The present researcher examined four factors which impacted on the intention of foreign tourists to visit Russia after FIFA 2018, and those factors were included demographic profile, costs, visitor services, political situation, and affective image.
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    • The present researcher (?) examined four factors which impacted on the intention of foreign tourists to visiting Russia aftefor FIFA 2018, and those factors were included; the demographic profile, costs, visitor services, political situation, and affective imageand finally the political environment.
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    • This research was descriptive research study, and quantitative data collected method was applied to obtain firsthand information from participants.
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    • This research was descriptive research study, and quantitative data collected method was applied to obtain firsthand information from participantsgood.
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    • The target population for this current study constituted all adults who are living outside Russia, who have visited Moscow at least once as international tourists in order to attend a mass sport event, and whose age started from 16 years old and up.
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    • The target population for this current study constituted all adults who are living outside Russia, who have visited Moscow at least once as international tourists in order to attend a mass sport event, and whose age started from 16 years old and up. Good
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    • Questionnaire link was distributed by posting on thematic forums in the Internet and in thematic groups in social network Facebook, and by sending direct e-mails and private messages in Facebook to reach 300 target respondents. 1.
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    • Questionnaire link was distributed by posting on thematic forums in the Internet and in thematic groups in social network Facebook, and by sending direct e-mails and private messages in Facebook to reach 300 target and respondents. 1.
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    • Over recent years in Russia, active scientific studies have been under way focused on rethinking the phenomenon of tourism in modern society, on studying it as the aggregate activity performed across multiple sectors of economy, on justifying systematic approach to its planning.
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    • Over recent years in Russia, active scientific studies have been under way focused on rethinking the phenomenon of tourism in modern society, we on studying it as the aggregate activity performed across multiple sectors of economy, on justifying systematic approach to its planning.
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    • There are unique natural objects (the lake Baikal, Valley of Geysers in Kamchatka Peninsula, Siberian boreal forest, etc.) and numerous historical and architectural landmarks in its territory, that includes parts of Europe and Asia.
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    • There are unique natural objects (the lake Baikal, Valley of Geysers in Kamchatka Peninsula, Siberian boreal forest, etc.) and numerous historical and architectural landmarks in its territorial ory, that includes parts of Europe and Asia.
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    • Specialists note that, despite the growth of inbound tourism, Russia’s tourist income is significantly lower than in other countries, showing similar growth of inbound tourism.
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    • (Silayeva A.A., 2016) According to World Tourism Organization (UNWTO), the share of tourism in the global GDP, taking into account the multiplicative effect, makes 9.4%.
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    • According to the data of the Ministry of Sport, Tourism and Youth Policy of the Russian Federation, the share of revenues from tourism in GDP in different countries amounts to figures as following: Greece - 15.5%, Spain - 15.3%, Austria - 12.5%, whereas in Russia this figure makes just 6.5% But According to statistics "Number of entry tourist trips to Russia 2014-2016 Statistics taken from the official site of Rustourizm" , the number of tourists arriving each year is declining .
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    • According to the data of the Ministry of Sport, Tourism and Youth Policy of the Russian Federation, the share of revenues from tourists m in GDP in different countries amounts to figures as following: Greece - 15.5%, Spain - 15.3%, Austria - 12.5%, whereas in Russia this figure makes just 6.5%¶
      But According to statistics "Number of entry tourist trips to Russia 2014-2016 Statistics taken from the official site of Rustourizm" , the number of tourists arriving each year is declining .
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    • By themselves, these games were the strongest impetus to the development of both domestic tourism proper and the popularization of Russia and Russian resorts among foreigners.
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    • However, Ukrainian events, including the annexation of Crimea to Russia and economic sanctions against Russia, on the one hand, added another extremely popular now internal direction - the Crimean peninsula, on the other hand, sharply reduced the demand for travel.
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    • Currently, the Olympic Games, both summer and winter, as well as world championships in football and hockey are the largest sporting events, so they occupy an important place in international tourism.
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