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    • "Millions of people wish there were more peace and harmony in the world.
    • How can they be achieved?" People over thousands of years were trying to reach harmony and peace in the world.
  • As we can analyze there is no "perfect" world, but we can make it better.
    • If everyone does a good thing or help someone each day, then in our life will be love and peace.
  • People should learn to communicate with each other and avoid conflicts.
  • To achieve peace a person should live in harmony with himself.
  • Simply being polite to people will make our planet more peaceful.
    • There is no "perfect" world, but we can make it better simply being polite and peaceful.
    • Judging may lead to misunderstanding between peoples or became a war between them.
  • Remember at first you judge yourself, and at second, the enemy.
  • To change the world, you should change yourself.
  • "Money is good for nothing unless you know the value of it by experience" .
  • It is rather difficult to imagine our lives without money.
    • People usually don’t think too much about the meaning of them.
  • The only idea and interest is to make more than they usually have.
    • I strongly believe that having money is a good thing, but they are not major theme in our life.
    • Firstly, having money is a good thing because they give us the possibility to satisfy our needs and desires.
    • People work a lot of time to earn as much as possible, but the more people earn the more they spend.
  • For example, millionaires have to spend much money on security.
    • They are often robbed, kidnapped and killed.
    • Moreover, they have to work much and that is why they spend very little time with their families and they often feel stressed.
  • People argue that if you have life experience, you can avoid a lot of problems.
    • Our generation lives in a much more comfort able world thanks not to money but the experience which the previous generation has given to us.
  • Everyone should learn to save money and to invest it in order to gain more.
    • If we know the value of money we can easily manage it.
  • It becomes a habit that leads to a successful life and career.
    • To sum up, money is a good thing, which give us the possibility to satisfy our needs and desires, but with a life experience we can avoid a lot of problem.

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