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- "Millions of people wish there were more peace and harmony in the world.
- How can they be achieved?" People over thousands of years were trying to reach harmony and peace in the world.
- As we can analyze there is no "perfect" world, but we can make it better.
- If everyone does a good thing or help someone each day, then in our life will be love and peace.
- People should learn to communicate with each other and avoid conflicts.
- To achieve peace a person should live in harmony with himself.
- Simply being polite to people will make our planet more peaceful.
- There is no "perfect" world, but we can make it better simply being polite and peaceful.
- Judging may lead to misunderstanding between peoples or became a war between them.
- Remember at first you judge yourself, and at second, the enemy.
- To change the world, you should change yourself.
- "Money is good for nothing unless you know the value of it by experience" .
- It is rather difficult to imagine our lives without money.
- People usually don’t think too much about the meaning of them.
- The only idea and interest is to make more than they usually have.
- I strongly believe that having money is a good thing, but they are not major theme in our life.
- Firstly, having money is a good thing because they give us the possibility to satisfy our needs and desires.
- People work a lot of time to earn as much as possible, but the more people earn the more they spend.
- For example, millionaires have to spend much money on security.
- They are often robbed, kidnapped and killed.
- Moreover, they have to work much and that is why they spend very little time with their families and they often feel stressed.
- People argue that if you have life experience, you can avoid a lot of problems.
- Our generation lives in a much more comfort able world thanks not to money but the experience which the previous generation has given to us.
- Everyone should learn to save money and to invest it in order to gain more.
- If we know the value of money we can easily manage it.
- It becomes a habit that leads to a successful life and career.
- To sum up, money is a good thing, which give us the possibility to satisfy our needs and desires, but with a life experience we can avoid a lot of problem.
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