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- Some people have participated in the evolution of humanity: it can be celebrities as well as ordinary citizens.Anyway, if they have one thing in common it is their will to move the world forward.
- We have studied photographs that draw our attention to a crowd of protesters.
- As we can see, women hold on the three pictures of placards we have slogans that perfectly describe their revolts.
- For example "votes for women", "women united" ...
- These slogans seek not only to sensitize the government but especially to pour out their anger against this maltreatment which continues to grow.
- In my opinion, the most important message to remember from all these years is equality.
- The fact that those who preceded us fought for this value, which is favorable not only to women but also to humanity as a whole.
- However, we see with the example of Hillary Clinton that this value is not yet acquired despite the evolution of the mentality of people from here to a century ago.
- Indeed, in 2016 after the article posted by "Humans of New York", we notice that the clichés still remains inked in our daily life.
- According to Hillary Clinton, when she makes her speeches by raising her voice to be heard she is considered hysterical.
- Unlike politicians, her cries are said to be "too strident" and she has to stay in her so-called role of women.
- Seeing this, I wonder if these stereotypes will ever cease.
- Sarah233
March 2018
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