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    • Some people have participated in the evolution of humanity: it can be celebrities as well as ordinary citizens.Anyway, if they have one thing in common it is their will to move the world forward.
  • We have studied photographs that draw our attention to a crowd of protesters.
    • As we can see, women hold on the three pictures of placards we have slogans that perfectly describe their revolts.
    • For example "votes for women", "women united" ...
  • These slogans seek not only to sensitize the government but especially to pour out their anger against this maltreatment which continues to grow.
    • In my opinion, the most important message to remember from all these years is equality.
    • The fact that those who preceded us fought for this value, which is favorable not only to women but also to humanity as a whole.
    • However, we see with the example of Hillary Clinton that this value is not yet acquired despite the evolution of the mentality of people from here to a century ago.
    • Indeed, in 2016 after the article posted by "Humans of New York", we notice that the clichés still remains inked in our daily life.
    • According to Hillary Clinton, when she makes her speeches by raising her voice to be heard she is considered hysterical.
    • Unlike politicians, her cries are said to be "too strident" and she has to stay in her so-called role of women.
  • Seeing this, I wonder if these stereotypes will ever cease.

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    • Some people have participated in the evolution of humanity: it can be celebrities as well as ordinary citizens.Anyway, if they have one thing in common it is their will to move the world forward.
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    • Some people have participated in the evolution of humanity: iIt can be celebrities as well as ordinary citizens. Anyway, if they have one thing in common it is their will to movepush the world forward.
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    • Some people have participated in the evolution of humanity: it can be celebrities as well as ordinary citizens.Anyways, if they have one thing in common it is their will to movtake the world forward.
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    • As we can see, women hold on the three pictures of placards we have slogans that perfectly describe their revolts.
      Vote now!
    • As we can see, women hold on the three pictures of placards and we have slogans that perfectly describe their revolts.
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    • As we can see, women hold on the three pictures of placards we havedescribing slogans that perfectly describe their revolts.
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    • These slogans seek not only to sensitize the government but especially to pour out their anger against this maltreatment which continues to grow.
      Vote now!
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    • The fact that those who preceded us fought for this value, which is favorable not only to women but also to humanity as a whole.
      Vote now!
    • The fact that those who preceded us fought for this value, which is favorable not only to women but also to humanity as a whole.
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    • The fact that those who preceded us fought for this value, which is favorable not only to women but also to the humanity as a whole.
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    • However, we see with the example of Hillary Clinton that this value is not yet acquired despite the evolution of the mentality of people from here to a century ago.
      Vote now!
    • However, we see with the example of Hillary Clinton that this value is not yet acquired despite the evolution of the mentality of people from here toin a century agofrom today.
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    • Indeed, in 2016 after the article posted by "Humans of New York", we notice that the clichés still remains inked in our daily life.
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    • Indeed, in 2016 after the article posted by "Humans of New York", we noticed that the clichés still remains inked in our daily life.
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    • According to Hillary Clinton, when she makes her speeches by raising her voice to be heard she is considered hysterical.
      Vote now!
    • According to Hillary Clinton, when she makes her speeches by raising her voice to be heard, she is considered hysterical.
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    • Unlike politicians, her cries are said to be "too strident" and she has to stay in her so-called role of women.
      Vote now!
    • Unlike politicians, her cries are said to be "too ''strident" and she has to stay in her so-called role of a womean.
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