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    • The production of genetically modified food should be banned

    • Store shelves are full of all kinds of food, including the genetically modified food, which is not as healthy and nutritious as the natural products.
    • Therefore, the question arises: is it worth to buy a food produced from transgenic plants and animals or it should be banned?
    • Personally, I convinced that genetically modified food is harmful for the human organism, and the government should take actions to prohibit the production and sale these sorts of products.
    • Firstly, people should remember that transgenic plants are one of potential factors, affecting on the row of ecosystems.
    • Besides, genetically modified food causes many harms for human health, including metabolic disease, immunity weakening, appearance of destructive allergic reactions and even cancer.
  • However, some people might argue with my opinion.
    • They believe that transgenic food is the best thing have been invented by human ever.
    • In their mind, there are many economic benefits in the gene modification of food.
    • Due to simplicity of the production of this food it can help to prosper the economic conditions in this region.
    • Moreover, the transgenic food is much cheaper than natural products.
    • Nevertheless, I cannot agree with these ideas.
    • One should take into account the fact that health is more important and appreciative than high costs of natural products.
    • It is better to pay a lot for a quality of food than be econometrical and damage your own health.
    • Despite the arguments by some critics, I I am feeling strongly about increasing extent of production of unhealthy food and starting develop pure agriculture.
  • All in all, in my view, the production and sale of genetically modified food should be banned.

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    • Store shelves are full of all kinds of food, including the genetically modified food, which is not as healthy and nutritious as the natural products.
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    • Store shelves are full of all kinds of food, including the genetically modified foods, which isare not as healthy and nutritious as the natural food products.
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    • Therefore, the question arises: is it worth to buy a food produced from transgenic plants and animals or it should be banned?
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    • Therefore, the following question arises: iIs it worth to buy a food produced from transgenic plants and animals or it should it be banned?
    • Therefore, the question arises: is it worthadvisable to buy a food produced from transgenic plants and animals or it should it be banned?
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    • Personally, I convinced that genetically modified food is harmful for the human organism, and the government should take actions to prohibit the production and sale these sorts of products.
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    • Personally, I´m convinced that genetically modified food is harmful for the human organism, and the government should take actions to prohibit the production and sale of these sorts of products.
    • Personally, I am convinced that genetically modified food is harmful for the human organism, and the government should take actions to prohibit the production and sale of these sorts of food products.
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    • Firstly, people should remember that transgenic plants are one of potential factors, affecting on the row of ecosystems.
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    • Firstly, people should remember that transgenic plants are one of the potential factors, affecting on the row of ecosystems.
    • Firstly, people should remember that transgenic plants are one the of potential factors, affecting on the rowchain of ecosystems.
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    • Besides, genetically modified food causes many harms for human health, including metabolic disease, immunity weakening, appearance of destructive allergic reactions and even cancer.
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    • Besides, genetically modified food causes many harms for the human health, including metabolic diseases, immunity weakening, appearance of destructive allergic reactions and even cancer.
    • Besides, genetically modified food causes many harms forto the human health, including metabolic diseases, immunity weakening, appearance of destructive allergic reactions and even cancer.
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    • Due to simplicity of the production of this food it can help to prosper the economic conditions in this region.
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    • Due to simplicity of the production of this food, it can help to prosper the economic conditions in this region.
    • Due to the simplicity of the production of thisprocess of this kind if food, it can help to prosper the economic conditions in this regioe region where it is grown.
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    • One should take into account the fact that health is more important and appreciative than high costs of natural products.
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    • One should take into account the fact that health is more important and appreciative than high costs of natural food products.
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    • Despite the arguments by some critics, I I am feeling strongly about increasing extent of production of unhealthy food and starting develop pure agriculture.
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    • Despite the arguments by some critics, I I a´m feeling strongly about increasing the extent of production of unhealthy food and starting developping pure agriculture.
    • Despite the arguments by some critics, I I am feeling strongly about increasing extent of production of unhealthy food and starting developdevelopment of pure agriculture.
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