Pataisymai

Text from Iwalkingintherain - English

    • How near are they to they childhood dreams?

  • Part 1.
  • When Ingrid was a child she wanted to become a doctor.
    • Today she is a coordinator for a charity.
    • She wanted to heal the people, but now she is responsible for paperwork.
  • These kinds of work are quite different.
    • Ingrid sometimes finds her work routine and depressing because It is so much bureaucracy and corruption.
    • So can we say that she is so far from her childhood dream?
  • I think she is not.
  • The main goal is the same.
  • She wanted to help and serve people as a doctor so that they would be healthy.
    • Now she is reaching the same goal as a coordinator of projects for charity.
    • Clinics, hospitals and school were built in Africa.
    • People can get medical services and education.
    • In spite of all difficulties Ingrid finds her work worthwhile and gets job-satisfaction.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English