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What makes people happy ? (TED)
- She thought that the final goal in the life was happiness.
So she searched that ideal job, that perfect boyfriend, that beautiful apartment.
But she felt anxious and adrift.
She wasn't alone, her friends were anxious too.
So, she decided to go to school to learn what truly makes people happy.

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- She thought that the final goal in the life was happiness.
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- So she searched that ideal job, that perfect boyfriend, that beautiful apartment.
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- But she felt anxious and adrift.
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- She wasn't alone, her friends were anxious too.
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- So, she decided to go to school to learn what truly makes people happy.
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