Pataisymai

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Text from ciao46 - English

  • The beach 2

    • Mary wanted to go to the toilet.
  • She was on her favourite beach and the toilet was in a locked cabin that could be opened only by asking for the key at the beach bar.
    • On one of the cabin's wall there was a notice saying that the ten thousandth person to use the toilet would have received a gift from Sofia Loren.
  • She couldn't believe it, yet she went to the toilet after asking for the key at the bar, as required, just because she needed.
  • Then she went back to lay on the beach.
  • After about ten minutes Sofia Loren came out from the bar wearing a swimsuit.
    • She was afraid of being recognised by everyone so she tried to attract Mary's attention just calling her quietly from the bar's doorway.
    • But Mary was too far and she couldn't hear her.
    • So that Sofia was forced to approach her.
  • Sofia said: 'Good morning ma'am.
  • You won a bouquet of flowers".
  • Mary replied: 'Thank you, ma'am.
  • They're very beautiful'.
  • Sofia smiled and went back towards the bar.
  • She wasn't recognised by anyone, but she heard three women talking about Mary and the gift she had just received.
    • One of the women said: 'she is happy because she won that bouquet of flowers, but she's such a stupid woman.
    • She doesn't even realise that when she sunbathes here at the beach, her husband cheats on her with another woman in their own bed.
    • And what is more funny is the fact that her husband is so jealous that he's always checking what she does.
    • Even now, he's the one with those binoculars, over there...'.
    • She pointed to a mountain in front of the beach after a strip of sea water.
  • They lived there.
    • Sofia was made huffy by what she had just heard and went to a point of the beach where she could be seen easily by him.
    • In fact he noticed her.
    • She was gesticulating to tell him not to spy anymore, otherwise her wife would have known everything about him.
  • He was shocked and went into the house where his lover was waiting for him.
    • He explained to her everything, and asked her what might have happened.
    • She said that his wife might already know everything about them but as she loved him too much, she didn't want to let him know she knew.
    • Because in that case she would have forced to leave him.
    • She just tried to convince him to give up with his betrayals by asking that woman to threat him.
    • The lover added smiling: "Don't worry about it and let's make love right now on her".
  • The husband replied: "Shut up! Fucking bitch! Move!
  • And don't come back!". She left.
  • In the garden there was a shark.
    • The husband was used to fishing for sharks and let them die in the garden near the sea.
    • He untied the shark and then laid down next to him.
  • The husband told the shark: "The sharks eat humans, so do what you have to do".
  • The shark didn't move at first.
  • He was scared and he couldn't believe it.
    • But after a while he followed his instinct and managed to put his mouth in front of the husband's feet.
  • The husband didn't make a move.
  • He felt remorse for the terrible thing he did to his wife.
    • The shark ate him in few bites and then went back to the sea.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English