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Văn bản từ vaness182 - English

    • My live!

  • Today is December 11th.
    • Yesterday was December 10th, at night, Xiomy my girlfriend and I went to the concert from a band of ours friends.
    • Today we went to see my aunt and later, we went to the mall to eat a ice cream and see a movie, but , I wanted kiss her, and I kissed her, and a woman scolded me, but two girls kissing.
    • I don't care what think about us, I like say her, Xiomy would you like tell me how many you love me.
    • I like hold her hand , but living a secret is sad.
    • Xiomy live one apartment down, I live up her.
    • We want open the hole between ours apartments and live together.
    • I like play music blaring on cell phone.
    • Xiomy like the rock, pop salsa, electronica. I like too.
    • "Como robarte una sonrisa" in english "How stole you a smile" is our song.

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