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    • Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers

    • The Internet has opened the world to modern teenagers and has allowed to communicate with people around the world.
    • However, among concerned parents, the question arises: are these interactions dangerous or it is a good idea to allow their kids have a conversation with stranger people?
  • Personally, I think that there are many reasons why children should use the Internet.
    • Firstly, having conversations with versatile people will help to broaden the horizon of the child.
    • Besides, teenagers can get objective advises and support, if they feel shy to discuss some problems with their parents.
    • And finally, if children have a talk with people who live in the other countries, they learn more about the culture and traditions of these nations , what can help them in the studying process.
    • However, the social media interactions have some disadvantages.
    • To begin with, in the Internet teenagers often run into a hackers who can posse the personal data of the child or his parents.
    • Moreover, there a high probability for children to coming across dangerous information, which can develop the cruelty and violence in the child.
    • Despite my respect to these arguments, I cannot agree because one should take into account the fact that parent must provide safety their personal information with special apps.
    • Also, with this apps they can prohibit teenagers from accessing to threatening sites.
    • In addition, parents should hold talk with their child about dangers of visiting similar sites.
    • In conclusion, I believe that despite the criticisms by some, the Internet seems to have changed our world to the better and we must try to make the best use of it.

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    • The Internet has opened the world to modern teenagers and has allowed to communicate with people around the world.
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    • The Internet has opened the world togateway to the outside world for the modern teenagers and has allowed to communicate with people around the world.
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    • However, among concerned parents, the question arises: are these interactions dangerous or it is a good idea to allow their kids have a conversation with stranger people?
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    • However, among the concerned parents, the question arises: are these interactions dangerous or its ist a good idea to allow their kids to have a conversation with strangers people?
    • However, among concerned parents, the question arises: are these interactions dangerous or, and it is a good idea to allow their kids to have a conversations with stranger peoples?
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    • Besides, teenagers can get objective advises and support, if they feel shy to discuss some problems with their parents.
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    • Besides, teenagers can get objective advises and support, if they feel shy to discuss someany problems with their parents.
    • Besides, teenagers can get objective advisesce and support, if they feel shy abouto discussing some problems with their parents.
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    • And finally, if children have a talk with people who live in the other countries, they learn more about the culture and traditions of these nations , what can help them in the studying process.
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    • And finally, if children have a talk with people who live in the other countries, they learn more about the culture and traditions of these nations , whatich can help them in their studying procesies.
    • And finally, if children have a talk with people who live in the other countries, they learn more about the culture and traditions of these nations , whatich can help them in their studying procesies.
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    • To begin with, in the Internet teenagers often run into a hackers who can posse the personal data of the child or his parents.
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    • To begin with, in theby using Internet, teenagers often runcome into awith hackers, who can possess the personal data of the child or his parents.
    • To begin with, ion the Internet teenagers often run into a hackers who can possesteal the personal data of the child or his parents.
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    • Moreover, there a high probability for children to coming across dangerous information, which can develop the cruelty and violence in the child.
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    • Moreover, there is a high probability for children to cominge across dangerous information, which can develop the cruelty and violence in the minds of child.
    • Moreover, there is a high probability for children to cominge across dangerous information, which can develop thelead to cruelty and violence in the child.
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    • Despite my respect to these arguments, I cannot agree because one should take into account the fact that parent must provide safety their personal information with special apps.
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    • Despite my respect toconcern towards these arguments, I cannot agree because one should take into account the fact that parents must provide safety to their personal information with special apps.
    • Despite my respect tofor these arguments, I cannot agree with them because one should take into account the fact that parents must provide safety for their personal information with special apps.
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    • In conclusion, I believe that despite the criticisms by some, the Internet seems to have changed our world to the better and we must try to make the best use of it.
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    • In conclusion, I believe that despite the criticisms by some, the Internet seems to have changed our world tofor the better and we must try to make the best use of it. ¶
    • In conclusion, I believe that despite the criticisms by some, the Internet seems to have changed our world tofor the better and we must try to make the best use of it. ¶
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