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    • Social media interaction is important for modern teenagers

    • The Internet has opened the world to modern teenagers and has allowed to communicate with people around the world.
    • However, among concerned parents, the question arises: are these interactions dangerous or it is a good idea to allow their kids have a conversation with stranger people?
  • Personally, I think that there are many reasons why children should use the Internet.
    • Firstly, having conversations with versatile people will help to broaden the horizon of the child.
    • Besides, teenagers can get objective advises and support, if they feel shy to discuss some problems with their parents.
    • And finally, if children have a talk with people who live in the other countries, they learn more about the culture and traditions of these nations , what can help them in the studying process.
    • However, the social media interactions have some disadvantages.
    • To begin with, in the Internet teenagers often run into a hackers who can posse the personal data of the child or his parents.
    • Moreover, there a high probability for children to coming across dangerous information, which can develop the cruelty and violence in the child.
    • Despite my respect to these arguments, I cannot agree because one should take into account the fact that parent must provide safety their personal information with special apps.
    • Also, with this apps they can prohibit teenagers from accessing to threatening sites.
    • In addition, parents should hold talk with their child about dangers of visiting similar sites.
    • In conclusion, I believe that despite the criticisms by some, the Internet seems to have changed our world to the better and we must try to make the best use of it.

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