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Văn bản từ alina_cand - English

    • My job been biologist v3

    • I enjoy working in the nature, but sometimes it could be pretty scary.
    • I was working in a little island next to Tasmania in Australia, were I have a tent to sleep and the ocean at front.
    • I and Nataly were working with populations of albatrosses witch are living on the island.
    • We were isolated in the island because we didn’t have any ship.
    • One morning I wake up to go the toilet, and I have my reef shoes outside of the tent.
  • I put my shoes on and I felt a pinch on my foot.
    • I was a little bit scared about it, because Australia has many poison animals and we couldn’t go easily to a hospital or to find a doctor.
    • I took out my shoe and I looked inside.
  • A scorpion was inside… bad luck.
    • I felt a normal panic I went to speak with Nataly fast as I could.
    • She had a look and with a calm voice told me that I was lucky because in Tasmania in the island isn’t any poison scorpion.
    • Yes, I didn’t die.

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    • I enjoy working in the nature, but sometimes it could be pretty scary.
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    • Better: "I enjoy working in the nature, but sometimes it could be pretty scary.nature, but sometimes it can be pretty scary." The term "working in nature" is perhaps vague. A native writer would probably say, "working in nature preserves", "working outdoors", "working in the great outdoors", "working in remote locations", "working in wilderness settings" or any number of other possibilities depending on the exact idea to be expressed. In any case, "working in the nature" would not be correct, and "can be" is better than "could be" in this phrase. Contact me if you would more help in exchange for help with my Spanish. Mucha suerte, Good luck to you
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    • I was working in a little island next to Tasmania in Australia, were I have a tent to sleep and the ocean at front.
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    • I was working ion a little island next to Tasmania in Australia, were I haved a tent to sleep andin and a view to the ocean at front.
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    • I was a little bit scared about it, because Australia has many poison animals and we couldn’t go easily to a hospital or to find a doctor.
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    • I was a little bit scared about it, because Australia has many poisonous animals and we couldn’t go easily go to a hospital or toneither could we find a doctor.
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    • She had a look and with a calm voice told me that I was lucky because in Tasmania in the island isn’t any poison scorpion.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • She had a look and with a calm voice told me that I was lucky because in Tasmania in the island isn’there aren't any poisonous scorpions.
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