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- I have a Little family.
- My mother Ludmila work in supermarket "Crown" and my father Vladimir retired on a pension 20 years ago because he is a major.
- Also i have elder sister she is a very good hairdresser.

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- I have a Little family.
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- I have a ~~Little~~small family.
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- My mother Ludmila work in supermarket "Crown" and my father Vladimir retired on a pension 20 years ago because he is a major.
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- My mother, Ludmila, works in the supermarket "Crown" and my father, Vladimir, is retired and on a pension since 20 years ago because he iwas a major in the army.
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- Also i have elder sister she is a very good hairdresser.
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- Also i have elder sister ~~she~~who is a very good hairdresser.
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