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About myself
- Last year I graduated Belarusian state University, my specialty is manager-economist.
- In July last year I got a job in Information and publishing center, I work there currently.
- I’m HR specialist and my job includes responsibilities such as hiring, dismissal, searching of employees, etc. If we talk about hobbies I prefer different activities s like cycling, swimming, volleyball.

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- About myself
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- Last year I graduated Belarusian state University, my specialty is manager-economist.
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- Last year I graduated from the Belarusian sState University, my special~~ty is manager-economis~~ising in economic management.
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- In July last year I got a job in Information and publishing center, I work there currently.
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- In July last year I ~~got~~began a job in an Information and publishing cent~~er, I work t~~re, where I currently still work.
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- I’m HR specialist and my job includes responsibilities such as hiring, dismissal, searching of employees, etc. If we talk about hobbies I prefer different activities s like cycling, swimming, volleyball.
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- I’m an HR specialist and my job includes responsibilities such as hiring, dismissal, searching ofor employees, etc.¶~~If we talk about~~With respect to hobbies I prefer different activities s like cycling, swimming, and volleyball. ¶
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