Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from EldyaTirza - English

    • dayoff

    • If i have a free time or day off,i usually spare my time with reading book, swimming, watching the movies, playing guitar,relaxing in the mall,culinary,and learning something new.
    • I love the nice place, one of the city that i love is bandung.
    • Bandung is the city that so close from jakarta, the distance only 2 hours or 125km.
    • Is there anybody come to this city?
    • So nice isn't it?
    • So many factory outlet, romantic culinary there, so recommended, damn i love it.
  • Thanks for the opportunity that you gave to me.
  • I have 4 siblings & i am the only daughter.
    • I'm so thankful to my God because i have a good.
    • Family, i have the best mom (yuph, you are the best mommy i ever had).
    • Have 3 brothers that i love.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English