Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from Redstump - English

  • My Working Day

  • Hello guys.
  • My name is German.
    • I'm citizen of Ukraine.
    • I'm student of National Aerospase University.
  • And I want to tell you about my working day.
    • I wake up at 7:20 and go to bathroom to do my every morning tasks, like brushing tooth, combing, washing face with water.
  • Then I go to the kitchen to prepare my breakfast.
    • I usually eat porridge with fruits and tea.
    • Then I dress up and go to my university.
    • Between second and third lesson (11:25) I have a lunch.
  • My lunch is very simple.
  • Any pastry with juice.
    • After the university (15:30) I can go either on the basketball or drums (playing on the drums).
  • I like music very much.
  • It inspires me.
    • After those things (18:00) I usually go home, If I don't meet any friend of mine.
    • At home I do my hometasks, then I have a supper, watch TV or read book. Like S.
    • King very much. After that.
    • I take a shower and brushing.
    • And go sleeping.
    • I fall asleep near 24:00 o'clock.
  • Thank you for your correction.
  • ( I hope last question is right, and doesn't need any correction.) Good Bye!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English