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    • Learning English

    • In my point view learning, the English language is important especially nowadays.
    • The English language it is the first language in the world.
  • Everyone needs to learn the English language.
    • Now I will tell the reasons that important for me to learn the English language I am an accountant and I would like to study professional certificate in accounting for example ( CPA, CMA, ACC and CIA ....etc).
  • And all these certificates are English.
    • So for me, I will not be able to study any of this certificate if I do not know English this is my reason.
    • Now I will tell the reasons why learning the English language it is important for everyone.
    • First of all, for people who love traveling and tourism speaking English important for them because all airports around the world use English as an international language.
    • Second, businessmen and businesswomen English also for them is important because the language of trade around the world is English.
    • Third, Doctors and Scientists English language the most important language for them because the highest percentage of research (80%) published in English.
    • Fourth, Actors and singers, they will not be known internationally if they do not speak English and everybody knows that Hollywood is the most important place for arts.
    • This my reasons to say that it is very important for everyone to learn English.
    • This not mean that we ignore our language.
    • We should Mastering mother tongue and on the top of that minimum, we should be fluent in English because of English the language of the whole universe.

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    • Now I will tell the reasons that important for me to learn the English language I am an accountant and I would like to study professional certificate in accounting for example ( CPA, CMA, ACC and CIA ....etc).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now I will tell the reasonsalk about thate important for mereasons why I need to learn the English language, I am an accountant and I would like to study for my professional certificates in accounting for example ( CPA, CMA, ACC and CIA ....etc).
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    • So for me, I will not be able to study any of this certificate if I do not know English this is my reason.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So, for me, I will not be able to study any ofto get this certificate if I do not know English t. This is my main reason.
    • So for me, I will not be able to study for any of thisese certificates if I do not know English, this is my main reason.
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    • First of all, for people who love traveling and tourism speaking English important for them because all airports around the world use English as an international language.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First of all, for people who love traveling and tourism, speaking English is important for them because all airports around the world use English as an international language.
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    • Second, businessmen and businesswomen English also for them is important because the language of trade around the world is English.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Second,ly, for businessmen and businesswomen English is also for them is important because it is the language of trade around the world is English.
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    • Third, Doctors and Scientists English language the most important language for them because the highest percentage of research (80%) published in English.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Third, Dly, for doctors and Sscientists, English languagis the the most important language for them because the highest percentage of research (80%), 80 percent, is published in English.
    • Third, Dly, for doctors and Sscientists, English language is the most important language for them because of the highest percentage of research (80%) percent, is published in English.
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    • Fourth, Actors and singers, they will not be known internationally if they do not speak English and everybody knows that Hollywood is the most important place for arts.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fourth, Aactors and singers, they will not be known internationally if they do not speak English and everybodfor it is commonly knowsn that Hollywood is the most important place for arts.
    • FourthLastly, Actors and singers, they will not be known internationally if they do not speak English and everybody knows that Hollywood is the most important place for arts.
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    • We should Mastering mother tongue and on the top of that minimum, we should be fluent in English because of English the language of the whole universe.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We should Mastering our mother tongue and on the top of that minimum, we should be fluent in English because of Englit ish the language of the whole universe.
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