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  • Essay for and against

    • Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment.
  • Do you think these problems can be solved?Write about: 1.Transport 2 Rivers and seas 3 (your own idea) It is commonly known that there is a bunch of problems connected with world environment.
  • This case requires immediate care.
    • However sometimes is believed that situation got out of control and it can't be helped.
  • The others are optimists and fight for pure air, soil, water and so on with faith.
    • Therefore it is possible to overcome those threatens?
  • This is out of question that people can't live without cars.
    • Most of people is forced to commute to work.
    • They do it not for pleasure by from necessity.
    • Planes, trains ,ships and other means of transport also are crucial when people and and goods have to be moved.
  • Secondly rivers and seas and also taken up and it is not possible to stop it.
  • It's not possible exclude waters from using.
    • Next thing which matters is air.
  • Companies pollute environment while producing general stuff.
    • Ecologist point out that bunch of things can be improved, habits can change.
    • It is possible reach destination by bike or electric car.
  • Technology is developing and with responsible planning can help with replacing noxious vehicles.
  • Moreover sewers can be cleaned and harmless.
  • People can spare water and it can also help.
  • Finally air could have been be also pure if people would have used environmentally friendly materials and furnaces.
  • To sum up there are different points of view whether saving environment is possible yet.
  • I personally believe that care about environment is important and it is worth fighting.
  • However I don't cheat myself thinking that world will be more and more pure.

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