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The girl of my dreams
- I dream, dream about a gir, she has beautifull eyes i see in her eyes a world, a world with a sky very blue and when her smile is so beautifull she in my dreams everytime dance and sing to me.

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- I dream, dream about a gir, she has beautifull eyes i see in her eyes a world, a world with a sky very blue and when her smile is so beautifull she in my dreams everytime dance and sing to me.
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- I dream, dream about a gir~~, s~~l. She has beautifull eyes i. I see in her eyes a world, a world with a ~~sky~~ very blue sky, and when sher smiles, she is so beautiful~~l s~~. She is in my dreams everytime she dances and sings to me.
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- I dream, dream about a girl, she has beautifull eyes i see in her eyes a world, a world with a ~~sky~~ very blue sky and when her smiles is so beautifull she in my dreams everytime dance and sing to me.
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- I dream, and dream about a gir~~, she has~~l with beautifull eyes i. I see in her eyes ~~a world,~~ a world with a ~~sky~~ very blue sky and when sher smile is, it's so beautiful~~l she~~ . Everytime in my dreams ~~everytim~~she dances and sings to me.
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