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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada Manonsrz - English

  • Unchecked increase of tourism

    • The tourism disturbs people who living next to a camping or tourist area.
    • Indeed, a family or a group of friends in holidays want to enjoy their week and don't care about noise, volume of music...
  • Moreover, inhabitants have to bear the plenty of events which are organized by the city or other because of hight number of tourists.
    • But there are a lot of solutions to avoid anti-social behaviour : cities could cracking down with hard measures : to forbid music from a defined hour, to drink on the street and to stay on the street (enforced tourists to make noise in appropriate places such as a pub or a night club.) Nevertheless we have to note that some well-known cities are especially cities of debauchery, so these measures would expel the tourists because they come just for that, particularly the youth.
    • The tourists don't care about environment because it isn't their city or their country so they feel less concerned, less responsible.
    • It's totally ridiculous because it's a well-known fact that pollution will be treated on a global scale.
  • If you are aware of consequences of your acts on environment, you have to be aware of this everywhere.
  • The goal isn't to live in your own city comfortably because there are no pollution but to live in a world responsible of welfare of everybody, and of future generations.
  • It's necessary to act in sustainable manner.
  • The tourism could be a way to protect environment too.
    • Indeed, it lead to a large profit for a country or a city : so many money which could be re-injected for preservation of environment.
    • City council could recruit more of employee to pick up rubbish in the street, to organize events promoting the respect of environment.
  • So, even if tourism could take a toll on pollution, there are ways to resolve this.
  • The majority of tourists go on the same place, even in a country : in France, they are tempted by Paris, and in Paris they visit the Eiffel Tower, walk on Trocadero square, on the Champs Elysées...
  • The solution would be to promote others places in France in order to share tourists on the territory, it would be a feat to be able to do this.
  • The hurdle which could be occur would be that historical monuments will be always more visited than others.
  • The solution could take the shape of ads in TV, in radio and of course in social networks.
  • The surge of tourism implicate an increase of cost of life in tourist countries : the rent is more expansive because housing is more researched.
  • In some of places, when tourists leave, there is nobody anymore because only few people can paid a rent so expansive during a long time.
  • The most important is that tourism has a bearing on business of a country, which reap a lot of profits.
  • Moreover, it permits a mixng of cultures that is good for open-mindedness and tolerance.
  • We have to stop complain, when there is no tourist we are dissatisfied, and when there are a lot of tourists we aren't happy too.
  • So it's an outstanding problem.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • Indeed, a family or a group of friends in holidays want to enjoy their week and don't care about noise, volume of music...
      Undi sekarang!
    • Indeed, a family or a group of friends ion holidays want to enjoy their week and don't care about noise, volume of music...
      MarthaOMarthaO profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • But there are a lot of solutions to avoid anti-social behaviour : cities could cracking down with hard measures : to forbid music from a defined hour, to drink on the street and to stay on the street (enforced tourists to make noise in appropriate places such as a pub or a night club.) Nevertheless we have to note that some well-known cities are especially cities of debauchery, so these measures would expel the tourists because they come just for that, particularly the youth.
      Undi sekarang!
    • But there are a lot of solutions to avoid anti-social behaviour : cities could cracking down with hard measures : to forbid music fromplaying after a defined hour, to drink on the street and to stay on the street (enforced tourists to make noise in appropriate places such as a pubs or a night clubs.) Nevertheless we have to note that some well-known cities are especially cities of debauchery, so these measures would expel the tourists because they come just for that, particularly the youth.
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      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • The tourists don't care about environment because it isn't their city or their country so they feel less concerned, less responsible.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The tourists don't care about environment because it isn't their city or their country so they feel less concerned, less responsible.
      bamdadmhbamdadmh profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • The goal isn't to live in your own city comfortably because there are no pollution but to live in a world responsible of welfare of everybody, and of future generations.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
    • Indeed, it lead to a large profit for a country or a city : so many money which could be re-injected for preservation of environment.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Indeed, it lead to a large profit for a country or a city : stoo manyuch money which could be re-injected for preservation of environment.
      bamdadmhbamdadmh profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11
  • Ayat 12
    • City council could recruit more of employee to pick up rubbish in the street, to organize events promoting the respect of environment.
      Undi sekarang!
    • City council could recruit more of employees to pick up rubbish in the street, to organize events promoting the respect oftoward the environment.
      bamdadmhbamdadmh profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12
  • Ayat 13
  • Ayat 14
    • The majority of tourists go on the same place, even in a country : in France, they are tempted by Paris, and in Paris they visit the Eiffel Tower, walk on Trocadero square, on the Champs Elysées...
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14
  • Ayat 15
    • The solution would be to promote others places in France in order to share tourists on the territory, it would be a feat to be able to do this.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 15TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 15
  • Ayat 16
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  • Ayat 18
    • The surge of tourism implicate an increase of cost of life in tourist countries : the rent is more expansive because housing is more researched.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 18TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 18
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  • Ayat 23