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  • Reject the consumer society

    • More and more people reject the consumer society why?
  • Do you understand them?
    • More and more people reject the consumer society in particular to avoid the materialism and live aside, there set the margins.
  • To avoid a life dedicated to run after the money and the technology, to avoid the fashion, to avoid the idea that the happiness is in the ownership, to avoid the hypocrisy and leave living free without being accountable to anybody, without still owing nothing to whoever it is if it is not for the nature.
    • These people look for simple pleasures offered by the nature as a sunny day or the noise of the mother which, for them to return them happier than the quite new iPhone 6 or new Rolex.
  • As Chris in In to the Wild who aims him at living a simple life I understand these people on certain points in particular on their noble purpose to live a simple life, except the society, to feel all the weight of the nature and to give up the technology and the other modern things.
    • But the fact of leaving without being prepared and living completely without technology can be dangerous and Christopher have the proof of it, the nature was stronger than him.
    • In conclusion, I think that this question to live except the consumer society is only a subjective question because this one this depends on the point of view and on purpose in life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • To avoid a life dedicated to run after the money and the technology, to avoid the fashion, to avoid the idea that the happiness is in the ownership, to avoid the hypocrisy and leave living free without being accountable to anybody, without still owing nothing to whoever it is if it is not for the nature.
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    • These people look for simple pleasures offered by the nature as a sunny day or the noise of the mother which, for them to return them happier than the quite new iPhone 6 or new Rolex.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • These people look for simple pleasures offered by the nature, such as a sunny day or the noise of the mother which, for them tonature, so that return to them the happier than the quiteness that a new iIPhone 6 or new Rolex. can't give.
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      Balsuok dabar!
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  • Sentence 6
    • As Chris in In to the Wild who aims him at living a simple life I understand these people on certain points in particular on their noble purpose to live a simple life, except the society, to feel all the weight of the nature and to give up the technology and the other modern things.
      Balsuok dabar!
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  • Sentence 7
    • But the fact of leaving without being prepared and living completely without technology can be dangerous and Christopher have the proof of it, the nature was stronger than him.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • Bbut the fact of leaiving without being prepared and living completely without technology can be dangerous and. Christopher haves the proof of it, the n. Nature was stronger than him.
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      Balsuok dabar!
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  • Sentence 8
    • In conclusion, I think that this question to live except the consumer society is only a subjective question because this one this depends on the point of view and on purpose in life.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • In conclusion, I think that this question to live except the consumer society is only a subjective question because ithis one this depends on the point of view and on purpose in life.
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      Balsuok dabar!
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