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  • Isolated regions

    • The lack of connectivity in isolated regions such as Tuva in Siberia take a toll on welfare of population because people haven't possibility to contact quickly emergency services.
    • It's totally crazy that in some part of the world people can't contact a service in time, while in other part is on the frontline of technology, we are connected everywhere, all the time and often to tell a pathetic story to our bestfriend.
    • The gap is too deep in this situation and it's based into what ?
    • Simply the place where we have born ?
    • International community should commit to insuring a connectivity everywhere.
  • It isn't a question of comfort, just a question of dignity here.
  • Living without any comfort, without electricity, internet for instance come to the fore an inequality.
    • A state have to insure the same possibility to inhabitants to access at the same services.
    • But, yes, it's possible to treat differently persons placed into differents situations, but there is an happy medium.
    • It will be normal if population in Tuva ask more comfort.
  • The problem is outstanding.
  • Nevertheless, often population in isolated region doesn't want to change her way of life.
  • They live differently, that's it.
  • We can think about « sentinelese » in India, a tribe which refused contact with civilisation.
  • So, it would be ridiculous to disrupt a tribe and enforced them to live like us while they don't ask anything.
  • Normally, protection and surveillance of minor are incumbent upon parents.
  • Indeed, they have to avoid that children put their life in danger, but children aren't animals which we put in cage.
  • To control all their acts is impossible, except if we place an electronic chip under their skin.
  • In our country, with the ubiquity of smartphone, that children have from the youngest age, it would be possible.
  • But, in an isolated region the lack of connectivity is an hurdle and when parents aren't present, a text message to know if everything's fine is unthinkable.
  • When the next house is 4 miles further, it's also difficult to ask neighbour to keep a check on our child.
  • Parent's work is enough gruelling, they don't needed on top of that to be consider responsable about situations in which they are powerless.

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