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    • Chass players and computers

    • Chass players and computers In a video, on Internet, the famous russian chess champion, Garry Kasparov, explains which rapport should be among chess players and computers, softwares, that play at chess.
    • Maybe before the year 1996 he had a different opinion, but in 1996, the IBM computer, Deep Blue, beated he, famous world chess champion.
    • He said that the humans should not have fear of computers, of their intelligence, because they aren't really intelligent.
    • They solve their problems, essentially, only with brute force of calculus.
    • I don't believe that Kasparov was truly convinced of that he said.
    • In fact after the year 1996, when Deep Blue beat he, he invented a new form of chess game, he has named it "Advanced Chess".
    • It consist in the union of calculus resource and human intuition, in the hope to obtain a superior chess entity, that only chess player or only chess computer.
    • A few match already are played in this way, the results to seem confirm Kasparov idea, only if the chess human player, match with computer, is a very strong player.
    • Perhaps a day the machines will surpass us, or perhaps we will be like the machines, or still, we will be biological and machines together.
    • Practically a scenery of cyberpunk culture.

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    • Chass players and computers In a video, on Internet, the famous russian chess champion, Garry Kasparov, explains which rapport should be among chess players and computers, softwares, that play at chess.
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      In a video, on Internet, t      The famous rRussian cChess champion, Garry Kasparov,
      explains which rapport should be amongin a video, that there should be a good rapport between chess players and, computers, and the softwares, ¶
      that play at c       used to play in a game of Chess.
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    • Maybe before the year 1996 he had a different opinion, but in 1996, the IBM computer, Deep Blue, beated he, famous world chess champion.
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    • Maybe before the year 1996 he had a different opinionidea, but in 1996, the IBM 's
      computer, Deep Blue, beat      ed he, famous world chess champion him,the most famous chess player in the world.
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    • Maybe before the year 1996 hHe may have had a different opinion before, but in 1996, the IBM
      computer,       's "Deep Blue," beated he, the World famous world cChess cChampion.
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    • He said that the humans should not have fear of computers, of their intelligence, because they aren't really intelligent.
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    • He said that the ,humans should not have fear of computers, of their intelligence,¶
      because they aren't really intelligent.
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    • He said that the humans should not have fear of computers, of their intelligence,¶
       of computers, because they aren't really intelligent.
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    • In fact after the year 1996, when Deep Blue beat he, he invented a new form of chess game, he has named it "Advanced Chess".
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    • In fact after theat year 1996, when,while Deep Blue beat heim, he invented a new form¶
      of chess game, he has named it      s "Advanced Chess".
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    • In fact, after the year 1996, when Deep Blue beat hebeing beaten by Deep Blue in the year 1996, he invented a new form
       of cChess game, he has and named it "Advanced Chess".
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    • It consist in the union of calculus resource and human intuition, in the hope to obtain a superior chess entity, that only chess player or only chess computer.
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    • It consist ion the union of calculus resource and human intuition, in the hope¶
      to obtain a superior chess entity, that only chess player or only chess computer.
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    • It consist ins of the union of calculus resource and human intuition, inwith the hope
       to obtain a superior chess entity, that only chess players or only chess computers can identify.
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    • A few match already are played in this way, the results to seem confirm Kasparov idea, only if the chess human player, match with computer, is a very strong player.
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    • A few matches are already arebeing played in this way, and the results to seem to confirm Kasparov
      's idea,. This can be proved only if the cChess human player, match with computer, is a very strong play is as strong as the computer.
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    • Perhaps a day the machines will surpass us, or perhaps we will be like the machines, or still, we will be biological and machines together.
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    • Perhaps there will be a day twhen machines will surpass us, or perhaps we will be like the¶
      machines, or still, we will be biological and machines togetherin one body being able to perform the qualities of a machine.
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