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Text from ana_london - English

  • A cup of coffee

    • A coffee begins to be enjoyed from the moment it is in the coffee machine, with the sounds that this emits when it begins to leave until it is served in the cup.
  • A coffee is a slightly thick liquid of a black color so deep that it can not be compared to the darkness of the universe yet unexplored; a coffee should be enjoyed hot and without sugar, to appreciate from the first sip that delicious bitter taste capable of awakening all our senses with just its aroma.
    • The coffee gives off a sweet, strong aroma, capable of impregnating all the air with its exquisiteness.
    • It is a pleasure for the eyes to see that liquid emitting smoke with delicate movements provoking desires to wrap our hands around their rate to feel the heat in our skin.
  • It is wonderful to feel how the soft and delicate liquid slides through our tongue and through the throat leaving a pleasant feeling that can be summed up in happiness.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Lause 1
    • A coffee begins to be enjoyed from the moment it is in the coffee machine, with the sounds that this emits when it begins to leave until it is served in the cup.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • A coffee beginis to be enjoyed from the moment it is in the coffee machine, with the sounds that ithis emits when it begins to leavecomes ready until it is served in the cup.
    • A coffee begins to be enjoyed from the moment it is in the coffee machine, with the sounds that this emits when it begins to leave until it isbeing served in the cup.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • A coffee is a slightly thick liquid of a black color so deep that it can not be compared to the darkness of the universe yet unexplored; a coffee should be enjoyed hot and without sugar, to appreciate from the first sip that delicious bitter taste capable of awakening all our senses with just its aroma.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • It is a pleasure for the eyes to see that liquid emitting smoke with delicate movements provoking desires to wrap our hands around their rate to feel the heat in our skin.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • It is a pleasure for the eyes to see that liquid emitting smoke with delicate movements provoking desires to wrap our hands around their rate cup and to feel the heat in our skin.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • It is wonderful to feel how the soft and delicate liquid slides through our tongue and through the throat leaving a pleasant feeling that can be summed up in happiness.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5