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- Hi my name is Margo i live in the Tumen.
My city is very beautiful.
- Tumen have got a lot of monument.
- My city not the capital but i love my city!!!

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- Hi my name is Margo i live in the Tumen.
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- Hi my name is Margo i live in ~~the~~ Tumen.
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- Hi, my name is Margo and i live in ~~the~~ Tumen.
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- Hi my name is Margo i, and I live in ~~the~~ Tumen.
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- My city is very beautiful.
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- Tumen have got a lot of monument.
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- Tumen haves got a lot of monuments.
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- My city not the capital but i love my city!!!
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- My city is not the capital but iI love my city!!!
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- ~~My city not the capital but i love my city!!!~~¶hello,¶My name is Queen i saw your profile today and became interested in you,i will also like to know you more, and i want you to send an email to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom i am.¶Here is my email address ( gargqueen@yahoo.co.uk )¶I believe we can move from here !and remember that distance or colour doesn't matter anything but love matters allot in life.¶I am waiting for your mail to my private email address above.¶see your reply soon.¶Queen. ( gargqueen@yahoo.co.uk )
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- My city is not the capital but i love ~~my c~~ity!!!
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