Corrections

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• I will talk about: my job, my dream job, what I think about overpaid jobs and what I would change in my present job.

• Firstly, I work in a dining room, with children.

• My class has four years old and I have 24 children.

• I work 3 hours.

• I have to help children to eat and when they finish we make different things, such as: to watch a film, to play with balls, to draw… I really love my job, but my salary isn’t big.

• So, if I could change anything in my job, I will change the salary and the number of the children in one class.

• I think that I have to much children.

• If I would have less children I will make my job better.

• Because of, I will spend more time with each child.

• My present job is related with my dream job.

• I have the degree for being a teacher, but now I need to pass my public competitive exams and also I need know very well Valencian and English.

• Moreover in this job the salary is better than in my present job.

• Because I will work more hours.

• But if you want to have a big salary to work as a teacher isn’t the best option.

• For me, the most overpaid job in the world is the footballers.

• I know that is a harder job, but there are a lot of others athletes that have a really small salary or they don’t have it.

• Although they win medals in the Olympic Games.

• I think it’s more important for example, a doctor that salves lives.

• To sum up, I like my job but I will change thinks like the salary or the number of children in one class.

• My dream job is to be a teacher and this is one of the reasons of what I’m learning English.

• And the last but not the least I think that a good overpaid job will be a doctor and not a footballer, like there is now.