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Preventing selfishness

• It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if parents would limit their kid’s right to make independent decisions to prevent them of being selfish.

• However, there are those who suppose that such action is an unreasonable restriction of freedom.

• This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that such kind of limitation will effect badly on social skills of a child in the future.

• Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly roots why youngster become egoists, secondly, it will analyze the reasons why kids should obtain rights to choose.

• There is an opinion that the main part of those who became an egoists due to lack of necessary parents control in the past.

• It is worth noting that this ultimately leads to the fact that the child grows up his eccentric.

• For example, it has been reported by the World Association of Psychologists that such sort of education is not only useless as a method of preventing egoism, but also is a main reason of it’s appearance.

• On the other hand, it is obvious that absence of the ability to make own decisions, a child can grow up dependent with low social skills.

• Moreover, most psychologists consider this kind of the parent’s behavior as one of the types of violence against the child.

• In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that any child should be treated as grown-up person and no unreasonable restrictions are allowed.