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  • How big is the ocean?
    • Do you know how big is the ocean? We can image.
    • A big ocean contains 5 small oceans.
    • It contains 99% water in the world and much salt.
  • In the ocean, there are many mystery things.
    • So it’s really hug.
    • It contains the longest mountain.
    • That mountain is longer than the Andes for 10 times.
    • The ocean contains the biggest waterfall, the tallest mountain (it’s taller than the Everest.), and the Challenger deep.
  • So the ocean is very big.
  • And it’s important for our planet.
  • We need water to be alive.
    • We must to improve the water’s troubles and keep the ocean still tidy.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English