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  • TASK 1 IELTS

    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage dstribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institute and university, in UK during 2010.
    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcome the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realted with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
    • The chart also shows a equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is overmatched by male, are private trainning institute, with a diference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers ocuppated a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English

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  • Kalimat 1
    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage dstribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institute and university, in UK during 2010.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage distribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institutes and university, in the UK during 2010.
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  • Kalimat 2
    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male teachers in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcome the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realted with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcomes the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realated with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Komentar
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
  • Kalimat 4
    • The chart also shows a equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
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    • The chart also shows an equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in the college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
  • Kalimat 5
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is overmatched by male, are private trainning institute, with a diference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers ocuppated a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is over-matched by males, are private trainning institutes, with a difference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers occuppatied a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5