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  • TASK 1 IELTS

    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage dstribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institute and university, in UK during 2010.
    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcome the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realted with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
    • The chart also shows a equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is overmatched by male, are private trainning institute, with a diference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers ocuppated a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.

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    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage dstribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institute and university, in UK during 2010.
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    • The bar chart above presents the information about the percentage distribution of men and women as teachers in six different educational levels: Pre- School,secondary, college, private trainning institutes and university, in the UK during 2010.
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    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
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    • Overall, the percentage of female teachers was higher than male teachers in three of six levels, while the percentage of men was only higher than female in two educational settings.
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  • Vakya 3
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcome the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realted with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
      Vote now!
    • The highest female contribution to the percentage of teachers is given in pre-school, that overcomes the male contribution with 96 per cent vs 4 per cent.Moreover, according to the bars realated with primary and secondary school, the female teachers percentage continue surprassing the male one.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • The chart also shows a equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
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    • The chart also shows an equality in the distribution of male and female teachers in the college, where for both of them the percentage is 50 per cent.
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  • Vakya 5
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is overmatched by male, are private trainning institute, with a diference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers ocuppated a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.
      Vote now!
    • On the other hand, the settings where female teachers percentage is over-matched by males, are private trainning institutes, with a difference of 8 per cent, and university where male teachers occuppatied a higher percentage of the distribution with 70 per cent vs 50 per cent.
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