Korjaukset

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  • It is about a North American Indian legend, which called the "bear man".
    • It is about hunter, who became a bear.
    • Once apon a time a hunter go to the mountins and desided shoot a bear.
    • Вut this bear was fairy and he can to foresee the future and do all kinds of miracles.
  • He just can talk.
    • He asked, that it is of no use to shoot at him, because it's impossible and he Invited him to live in a cave.
    • The cave was full of the bears and they dancing in it.
    • They saw a hunter and try to shoot from his gun.
    • But they did not get anything done, because they were very shaggy and they has long uncomfortable claws.
  • A man lived with a bear for a year, but once upon a time hunters came back.
  • At this moment the bear anticipated a loss.
    • But he asked for a man to liven up him.
    • He asked to cover the blood with leaves, after they kill him and then to look back - the bear shake himself and go back into the woods.
    • And the man became look like as a bear, hunters doesnt Immediately recognized him, because he looked like as a wild animal.
    • A man asked to the people to leave aloone him for some time, until the bear nature had left him.
    • But Then, his wife came and disturbed him.
    • And he died, because he could not live like a human.

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