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Text from Symmons - English

    • This Time (part 7)

    • It has been a few times now that I realized I've got that hypersensitivity to sniff out when things goes wrong.
    • I am talking about this time, when counting to 10 was difficult for me, this time when we used to play out naked foot even on the gravel.
    • This timewe climbed the trees, played with the garden hose on summer even when the water was cold.
    • This time when we cycled on the street even when ours parents lost our track.
    • This time when we searched into ours parents' stuff, found board games and enjoyed playing with it even with our own rules.
    • This time when we chased out chickens and sheeps even if we forbid us to do so.
    • This time when running, climbing, crawling, jumping and rolling was our daily, far apart from new technology.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English