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  • Happiness

    • As I'm developing my perception of life.
    • I thought sharing what I have found in English may be a good idea : According to a study, People are more likely to suicide when they have meaningless life rather than unhappy life.
    • So, it may be more interesting to look for meaningful life instead of happy life.
    • Happiness came after, when you feel the fulfillment of living a meaningful life.
    • To find a meaning to your life, you must set goals.
    • Those goals must be coherent with values that you consider as important.
    • Working hard on goals, doesn't necessarily make feel happy in short term, but at long term it will.
    • Achieving sub-goals of your main goals every day will cause you brain to release endorphine, which make you fell happy.
    • So for this reason I believe in this following quote : “happiness is the progressive realization goals”

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