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Text from Ana_Vi - English

    • Could anyone check my poem, please?

    • I got a life to live I got a love to give I got a soul to feel You don't care.
    • I got a road to go And I won't let you know I need your smile and glow More than air.
    • That's in another space You need my warm embrace.
  • Here you don't know my name.
    • But I swear I'll bring you morning dew, Protect you from the flu, Without telling you I was there.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English