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  • Personal statement for a master's degree

    • As far as I remember, I have always enjoyed languages and foreign cultures.
    • After my Degree in Literature that I passed in France, I had the opportunity to go to live in London where I stayed 2 years and a half.
    • Then, I lived in other european countries.
    • As a result, I am able to speak 4 languages now : French, English, Spanish and Italian.
    • But knowing a language is not only being able to have a mundane conversation with a native speaker, it involves much more knowledge about the way a foreign speaker perceives the reality.
    • Personally, I am willing to know a foreign language in all its different subtilities, that is why I have continued to learn and improved my level in the languages that I knew, even though I was able to speak fluently these languages.
    • Thus, I passed the CPE (Certificate of Proficiency in English) of Cambridge obtaining a grade B and I have recently finished a Master in specialized translation in Spain, where I have been living for one year.
    • Regarding my experience as a translator, I have started to translate as a volunteer in 2007 for various NGO, essentially from English into French.
    • I also had the opportunity to translate from English and Italian into French when I was working in a company specialized in cosmetics in France.
    • I was translating commercial documents, websites, brochures etc. I also have experience as a freelance translator but being aware of my needs to improve my translation skills and in order to become a certified professional translator, I decided last year to take a course to achieve a Master in Specialized Translation in the Spanish-French combination.
    • I obtained very good marks all along the academic year and most of all, I enjoyed this experience and I am willing to repeat it with a Master in Translation Studies in the English-French combination.
    • Concerning your programme, it was very appealing to me for many reasons : First of all, even though I like the theory and the traductology field, I really appreciate the practical content of this course to have a clear feedback from professionals and tools to become accurate as well as productive.
  • Secondly, the distance learning option is very important in order to combine my studies with my professional and family obligations.
    • Furthermore, the Master in Specialized Translation that I took in Spain was also by distance learning and I really appreciated the flexibility of this kind of programme.
    • In addition to this, I am a very independant student which allows me to follow an on-line course without missing a classroom or a flesh and blood teacher.
    • The third reason why I am really interested in your Master in Translation Studies is its EMT label that proves the quality of your programme.
  • Besides, I am thinking about continuing my studies until a PhD in order to share my knowledge and my experience in the translation field with other students.
  • I hope I will have the pleasure to prove my abilities in the Master of Translation Studies of the University of Portsmouth.
    • I look forward to hearing from you and I remain at your disposal should you require any further information. Sincerely,

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    • After my Degree in Literature that I passed in France, I had the opportunity to go to live in London where I stayed 2 years and a half.
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    • After my Ddegree in Lliterature that I passed in France, I had the opportunity to go to live in London where I stayed 2 yearsfor two and a half years.
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    • But knowing a language is not only being able to have a mundane conversation with a native speaker, it involves much more knowledge about the way a foreign speaker perceives the reality.
      투표하세요!
    • But knowing a language is not only being able to have a mundane conversation with a native speaker, it involves much more knowledge about the way a foreign speaker perceives the reality.
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    • Personally, I am willing to know a foreign language in all its different subtilities, that is why I have continued to learn and improved my level in the languages that I knew, even though I was able to speak fluently these languages.
      투표하세요!
    • Personally, I am willing to know a foreign language in all its different subtitlities, that is why I have continued to learn and improved my level in the languages that I knew, even though I was able to speak fluently speak these languages.
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    • Thus, I passed the CPE (Certificate of Proficiency in English) of Cambridge obtaining a grade B and I have recently finished a Master in specialized translation in Spain, where I have been living for one year.
      투표하세요!
    • Thus, I passed the CPE (Certificate of Proficiency in English) of Cambridge obtaining a grade B and I have recently finished a Masters in specialized translation in Spain, where I have been living for one year.
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    • Regarding my experience as a translator, I have started to translate as a volunteer in 2007 for various NGO, essentially from English into French.
      투표하세요!
    • Regarding my experience as a translator, I have started to translate as a volunteer in 2007 for various NGOs, essentially from English into French.
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    • I also had the opportunity to translate from English and Italian into French when I was working in a company specialized in cosmetics in France.
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    • I also had the opportunity to translate from English and Italian into French when I was working in a company specializeding in cosmetics in France.
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    • I was translating commercial documents, websites, brochures etc. I also have experience as a freelance translator but being aware of my needs to improve my translation skills and in order to become a certified professional translator, I decided last year to take a course to achieve a Master in Specialized Translation in the Spanish-French combination.
      투표하세요!
    • I was translating commercial documents, websites, brochures etc.¶
      I also have experience as a freelance translator but being aware of my needs to improve my translation skills and in order to become a certified professional translator,
      last year I decided last year to take a course to achieve a Masters in Specialized Translation in the Spanish-French combination.
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    • I obtained very good marks all along the academic year and most of all, I enjoyed this experience and I am willing to repeat it with a Master in Translation Studies in the English-French combination.
      투표하세요!
    • I obtained very good marks all along the academic year and most of all, I enjoyed this experience and I am willing to repeat it with a Masters in Translation Studies in the English-French combination.
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    • Concerning your programme, it was very appealing to me for many reasons : First of all, even though I like the theory and the traductology field, I really appreciate the practical content of this course to have a clear feedback from professionals and tools to become accurate as well as productive.
      투표하세요!
    • Concerning your programme, it was very appealing to me for many reasons :¶
      First of all, even though I like the theory and the traductology field, I really appreciate the practical content of this course to have a clear feedback from professionals and tools to become accurate as well as productive.
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    • Secondly, the distance learning option is very important in order to combine my studies with my professional and family obligations.
      투표하세요!
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    • Furthermore, the Master in Specialized Translation that I took in Spain was also by distance learning and I really appreciated the flexibility of this kind of programme.
      투표하세요!
    • Furthermore, the Masters in Specialized Translation that I took in Spain was also by distance learning and I really appreciated the flexibility of this kind of programme.
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    • In addition to this, I am a very independant student which allows me to follow an on-line course without missing a classroom or a flesh and blood teacher.
      투표하세요!
    • In addition to this, I am a very independaent student which allows me to follow an on-line course without missing a classroom or a flesh and blood teacher.
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    • The third reason why I am really interested in your Master in Translation Studies is its EMT label that proves the quality of your programme.
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    • The third reason why I am really interested in your Masters in Translation Studies is its EMT label that proves the quality of your programme.
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    • Besides, I am thinking about continuing my studies until a PhD in order to share my knowledge and my experience in the translation field with other students.
      투표하세요!
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    • I hope I will have the pleasure to prove my abilities in the Master of Translation Studies of the University of Portsmouth.
      투표하세요!
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    • I look forward to hearing from you and I remain at your disposal should you require any further information. Sincerely,
      투표하세요!
    • I look forward to hearing from you and I remain at your disposal should you require any further information. Sincerely yours
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