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    • Students should take out student loans to avoid working while s

    • While a prospective student is choosing a university to continue his or her education, the opportunity of financing this education may be the key point in applying for this or that university or institute.
    • One of the ways which take students for financing their education is working during their studying.
    • And while some believe that this is the best solution who whose who cannot afford their education, I believe it is better to take out various loans which are provided by a university.
    • The first reason why I think that students should better take loans rather than work is that their job may negative cause their educational process.
    • To cover all tuition a student may work extra hours that may lead to tiredness, sleepless, and the lack of concentration and attention.
  • Moreover, a working student may skip classes, because his or her schedule at work and at university may be controversial.
  • For example, when I was a third year student, I got a suggestion to work as an English teacher for children in a kindergarten.
    • At first, I was so happy to give money to spend it on books, textbooks, and other important stuff, but when I had worked for a week, I started miss my classes, because I had to work in the mornings exactly when my classes started.
  • Likewise, a student who is working during a semester may receive lower marks and scores, because he or she will spend all his or her free time at work.
  • Some universities stick to the principle that students should also work hard out of campus that is why students of such universities have a lot of tasks and projects to do.
  • Doing them requires plenty of free time.
    • For example, my friend, who is purchasing his bachelor program in the field of medicine, has a lot of various assignments.
    • And he invests all his free time to finish them till their deadline.
    • To sum up, I think that students’ loans help students to be more focused on his or her education.
    • Immersed only in studying, a student will not skip classes as well as will receive higher scores.
  • That is why I believe that it is better to put a working experience off after graduation and use the ability to receive a loan to finance the education.

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  • câu 1
    • While a prospective student is choosing a university to continue his or her education, the opportunity of financing this education may be the key point in applying for this or that university or institute.
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    • While a prospective student is choosing a university to continue his or her education, the opportunity of financing this education may be the key point in applying for this or that particular university or institute.
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  • câu 3
    • And while some believe that this is the best solution who whose who cannot afford their education, I believe it is better to take out various loans which are provided by a university.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And while some believe that this is the best solution who whose who cannot afford their education, I believe it is better to take out various loans which are provided by a university.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • The first reason why I think that students should better take loans rather than work is that their job may negative cause their educational process.
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    • The first reason why I think that students should better take loans rather than work is that their job may negative cause their educational procescause problems in their studies.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 5
    • To cover all tuition a student may work extra hours that may lead to tiredness, sleepless, and the lack of concentration and attention.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To cover all tuition fee a student may work for extra hours that may lead to tiredness, sleepless, and the lack of concentration and attention.
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    • Moreover, a working student may skip classes, because his or her schedule at work and at university may be controversial.
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  • câu 7
    • For example, when I was a third year student, I got a suggestion to work as an English teacher for children in a kindergarten.
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  • câu 8
    • At first, I was so happy to give money to spend it on books, textbooks, and other important stuff, but when I had worked for a week, I started miss my classes, because I had to work in the mornings exactly when my classes started.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At first, I was so happy to give money to spend it on books, textbooks, and other important stuff, but when I had worked for a week, I started missing my classes, because I had to work in the mornings exactly when my classes started.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Likewise, a student who is working during a semester may receive lower marks and scores, because he or she will spend all his or her free time at work.
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    • Some universities stick to the principle that students should also work hard out of campus that is why students of such universities have a lot of tasks and projects to do.
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    • For example, my friend, who is purchasing his bachelor program in the field of medicine, has a lot of various assignments.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For example, my friend, who is purchasuing his bachelor program in the field of medicine, has a lot of various assignments.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • That is why I believe that it is better to put a working experience off after graduation and use the ability to receive a loan to finance the education.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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