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    • COVER LETTER IMPORTANT

    • I’m a first year student at the Université Claude Bernard Lyon 1 studying a Higher National Diploma in Corporate and Administrative Management.
    • I would like to apply for a semester in the Dawson College.
    • With this letter I will convince you that I’m the perfect student to go to Dawson College in Montréal.
    • I always have been interested in Management, logistic, languages and marketing.
    • I always wanted to add an international dimension size to my university course to reach my goal which is to work in humanitarian in a global scale.
    • I choose GEA in order to acquire some knowledge on all the aspect of management.
    • I think that going at Dawson College will be a great addition to my studies.
    • This experience is seen as a personal and profesionnal enrichment.
    • It’s a way to develop even more my skills, my autonomy and it’s a value-adding to my future carrier.
    • Moreover Dawson college is going to be a very important step because I would like to oriente myself to a north american university after my diploma.
    • Besides, my character and my nature require new discoveries.
    • This need is driving by my taste and my interest pronounced for other culture works and cultural differences.
  • Moreover the challenges of living and accepting different working practices, surviving without my usual support network of family and friends will increases my resourcefulness and resilience.
    • It will also makes me more marketable to employers.
  • Montreal has been named the world’s best city for the students in the QS Best Student Cities 2017.
    • The encounter and research I performed really made me enthusiastic to discover Quebec.
    • Montreal is a mix of 21st century business infrastructure with and European Old charm.
  • Which makes it an ideal destination for me since I have a positive attitude and an open-mind which again allows me to interact with people from different cultures.
    • Also, Dawson College education is provided in english.
    • It will be very usefull for me to practice my english knowledge because I dream to be trilinguial in french english and spanish.Dawson College could make my dream come true.
    • Moreover I already went to USA where I’ve worked for an american family as a babysitter for a summer.
    • I use to make back and forth beetwen Lyon-Bruxelles-London to see my friends that I meet on the social Network Instagram.
    • When it comes to meet other people from other country I’m very sociable and enthusiastic.
  • I’m really familiar with the English world.
    • At the moment I’m interning with SABIC, a Saudi Arabian corporation global leader specialised in petrochemical in Morocco.
    • The internship is conduct in english.
  • I also think that I will be able to represent the IUT Lyon 1 fairly well in another country.
  • I’m very confident with our college and I enjoy the program.
  • Therefore I think that I will be a good ambassador for the IUT Lyon 1.
    • In addition I am very positive about our university, I am satisfied with my program so far and I really like our campus.
    • It became clear to me that the University is really trying to give us an opportunity with this parternship beetwen Dawson College and IUT Lyon 1.
    • I really want to put an international dimension in my future carrier.
    • As long as I have always been surroudend by diversity ; My education is europeen, I grew up in a Mediterranean family, and I want to pursue further studies in north America.
    • Because of all these reasons, I think that a semester in Dawson will be interesting and value-adding to undertake into the humanitarian world.

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