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- The biggest mistake for every body is that, when they face a problem choose escape instead of stay.
- If stay and win, they got respect, and if they loose, learn a lesson to invincibility

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句子 1
- The biggest mistake for every body is that, when they face a problem choose escape instead of stay.
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- The biggest mistake for every body is that, ¶
  when they face a problem they choose to escape instead of ~~stay~~facing it.
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- The biggest mistake for every body is that, ¶
  when they face a problem they choose escape instead of ~~stay~~confronting a problem.
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句子 2
- If stay and win, they got respect, and if they loose, learn a lesson to invincibility
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- If stay and win, they goet respect,¶
  and if they loose, they learn a lesson tof invincibility.
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- If they stay and win, they goet respect,¶
  ~~and~~but if they loose, they learn a lesson tof invincibility.
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